I need some feedback for this track
 

plus u will like it..

http://www.soundclick.com/dachemists

"Chemical Reaction ft. Sage & Shawn Mcquaid"

thx if u take the time to comment

^^^^^^? cmon yall want some good rap

first verse was ripped real nice. content of the 2nd & 3rd was aight but maybe a bit more edge in the presentation.

keep representin the north.

need beats: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/2...productions.htm

thx for the feedback man