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Carsonjet -v- Dezyir
5 barz
20 minutes normal rules 20 minutes start now- |
Yo ima hit this up when ya'll spit peep this battle make an honost vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2 |
no fuken free postin ass hole
Now... ahem...dezyir... WachOut mista NewbieNator-Slash-Eliter'Pre-verse Mastibator// Posin'Artist-but TruLy a Bitch wit no Dik~but'Rides em like'a~Hata// Postin-up lookin for "my first RB posts" in bitch-slapped// Tryna up ta 14-witta bitch dat neva rapped-lookin like u da'bich dat need B' slapped// ON all Numerical Levels Ur droppin single Digits While Im frontin witta Triple// My Verse-so Phat-could Veiw it on a swivel-Ya spit-cant tremor a single ripple// so lemme keep it simple... I cut-slash-dash-trash-an smoke ya like a bag'a seedless hash// Face-it ya verse ya Traced-it ur-runnin Desciples re-cycles' like of re'runs 'MASH// Dezyir-dun deserve a shot-droppin shot's like motion-less Email-bots// Capped Open like'2'o clock'Bar parkin Lot's~face it-Bitches...they'll neva change dere spots// |
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how do you expect to get a win by yourself when your whole crew is afraid of Inspire?.. 80 battles? shit kid, been here long as i have and its already time to retire.. no Dezyir, thats why when it comes to rap you dont have much to offer.. no thinking required, best insult to you is saying your on B.R.E.s roster!.. not even 1/2 a herb, make a compilation of Carsons battle entitle it "When Wackness Strikes".. gonna get hurt, not a chef so you dont touch knives..not an MC either so dont touch mics.. closer.. must be a window open cause murkin this fag was a breeze, im tired of beating these herbs...so for the next few lines ill get some z's zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
i dont even need 10...good luck...
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weak-for such a record............................................ ...
lets get sum votes in_________________________ __________________________________________ |
^i know..im talking on aim and i threw a verse together....whatever i dont care..
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while we are waiting for votes hit this up Car..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68673 |
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Damn this was some nice, close, heated shit
both came out hard wordplay-Carson punches-carson flow-tie- multies-carson vote-carsonjet |
cjet first two barz came hella nice....afta that your punches did'nt hit that hard and your disses were ok....your last two barz hit nicely with a good diss but did'nt carry enuff heat..
Dez had tha betta disses...and nicer punches..did'nt really come that hard but to me he landed betta...last bar of dez was a killa... Dez gets my vote |
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Carson-You got to a nice start with the technicality and the punches, that shit was ahrd to udnerstand if you can't read good. I loved that triples line. Dez-That shit was pretty hot. It was hella simple but good. You should have taken mroe lines to him, it was funny but you just fell short. The opening lines were cool. Vote-Carson VOTE ON THIS SHIT: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68732 |
OK good battle lol
Flow - Carsonjet, Dezyir yours was all over the place Personals - Dezyir .. he is king lol Punches - Carsonjet Wordplay - Tie .. both weak so Vote - Carsonjet.. .. Dez.. you need 2 work o your finishers and Carsonjet.. You seem to think i only spit 2nd lol??? In my past 6 battles, apart from the 1 with Dezyir.. i have spit 1st.. and i would have in mine and Dez's battle but my shit crashed anyway seein as you think like thta how about a battle? i spit 1st/.. you have 10 minutes 2 spit after me? |
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