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The butterfly has blossomed the death
the peace keeps war on its knees, beach sun galore//
but the other end of the-spectrum-must expose itself with [gore]// sunset, off-horizon, but then, two ...specimens... are fighting// over-sizing there muscular structure // the brave warrior, a race to the top of world coverZ// veins on top of there skin, membranes as thick as waste gas polluting oxiGin// energy distrubition stomps the female, she sails backwards cant stand watch them// them mans drop themselves of the evil and hatred// realising that there chance is enevitable to mating// with sinister eyes, they surprise her behind// she dodges one's blow which would incline her precious spine// her vision is blistered, but is the best of times all forgotten?// look carefully through the wall of violence, a butterfly has blossomed// the scenerio goes as follows, a 13 yr old in the time of menstruation// hormones competing with testorone, levels shooting beyond unknown// and she has to come home, a place where nowhere like in the world// her 4 walls bleed the angers creeds// down the street a hospital awaits for another suicidial casualty// unreliable castastrophies, she cant hold enough calories to mantain her pregnacy// and her father, also the unborn childs father// multi-father, violated mind who can see no further// and when night breaks from the fall of the dawn// she can hear screams in the basement from the fall of there mourn// she cant look up to her mother, only down on the floor// sacred practices of horrific images// relating to the scientific study of ancient torture methods// and then one day for first time of her life, she feels the joy of being high// looking down the skyscraper of XTC, she hears her mother cry "come lie down next to me"// she does just that, she runs to middle of the street to whom she redeems hell of life// she cuts her throat and she lies, but notices a thing// could it be? NO? a butterfly in the sun, dancing// welcome to the lab of recreational multi-breeding techniques// the tech speaks, technology you havnt seen in ya wildest dreams// hence upon the fusion of dna structures in compilation// hallways of the unborn super-soldiers mason// genitically unbreed patients turned into fearsome agents// capable of blowing the earth, for which aliens would find amazing// and theres one scientist, with the mind of an iron fist// nowing this his shit is prohabiting from the lightness// his knowledge, can bring the u.s. government mission acomplished// which is to reign supreme by creating unnartual super-zombies// he takes stand, he reachs for the button upon which the united nations look upon him// and he turns round with a smile, a button which is set to blow the lap into a crubble pile// but on the projection he sees something is he cant believe// an hallucination of a butterfly dancing at half twelve, a man is eating pizza, feeling overwhelmed// celebrating his discoverery of a new form of stars in the space realm// in disbelief his partnet takes a look for himself// and shouts "THATS A FUCKING METEOR WHICH IS HEADING FOR THE WORLD"// "impossible, upon mathmitical calculation thats unknowledgable"// he takes another look, realises the the dimensions have increase from which he wrote in his book// a thought traveled across his brain, WE FUCKED// they report the tragic news to government// there disgusted and believe its a prank call from a bored divorced husband// but then 12 weeks later, 1/2 of the world look upon the ring// this spherical thing and every country has already risen in temperture by 12 degrees// its too late, its all too close, too close, 2 close// 30 seconds remaining// ironically the specimen, the little girl and scientist see it agian// the thing they saw in disbelief, was behind the butterfly wings// morale: things are not what they seem, the things you think, are not what you always hope for them things to be. CAREFUL NOW |
uppin critique
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i like ya rhyme structure, off the norm. and flowed nice. wordplay was sick all through-out it. i liked this A LOT. good story all the way through. the verse about the girl was my fav. like daughter like mother. PEACE
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thanx, still uppin
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