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Raz Vs. Kautious
Yo rules:
10-15 lines no hate votes ect.... checkin's whoever goes when ya ready verse due 30minutes after checkin Let's Battle |
Here's a lil sumn sumn, ya know nuffin big jus lil verse..........
you ready mayne........ Yo ya punch delivery is that of tha united states postal service// garrentted he's nervous, been here since march and he still actin herbish// look at tha sig, all colors of tha rainbow, this bitch is homosexual// i'm ambedexrial, pimp smack ya wit either hand, u can't match my intellectual// yo this lion is on da prey and i huntin kautious da herbish antelope// don't matter what color beray(spellin), u'll still be silenced by da scope// fuck if u prewrote, just means ya shits older and ready for allztimerz// he braggin bout doin shows, this bitch is headlinin, mom and pop's deli dinners// i cremate tha alphabet, while kautious just gives it da hand// after this merking, his rep gonna be sinkin like he joggin thru quik sand// listenin ta heavy metal records backwards is tha equivilent of my lines// insted of rockin his crew sign, he gotta chain wit a charm of calvin klein// i'mma call u marv albert kuz u bite-n and rape-n// everyone see ur posts and it's despizing and hatin// in 4 years kautious gonna be fillin da Raz tour Bus wit gas, at his service station// Yo don't no show...... lets do this |
whoa.........that was hard..............lets see da reply............................................. ....................................
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Damn this is gonna fuckin suck if its a noshow, i tried pm'ing u kautious but u need to clean ya box out........Post!
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Yo u online now, lets get this shit goin dawg............i hate draggin out battles ya know...............................
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yeah mayn sorry bout dat
im gonna spit also- it's only a no show if i check in but i never no show :D |
WEll where ya at dawg.........common don't dragg this shit out no longer just spit........................................
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represent my side and i'll elemetalize your whole crew,
when i strike with volts of light you be burning like a holocaust jew//(not racist, sorry if you jewish) - strike hits compact to rest yeah hart and cave yeah chest through, you lack new skills kid you "old school" have u shocked and rested like old blue//(half to see "old school"<--the movie lmao) - 8-3 a nice record raz has for battling newbs, your losses came from cats u didn't think compared to u// - so kid now your record changes over poll to '8-4', your structure 'won't be as even' when i 'rip out your spinal core'// - giving it to u straight and hardcore ripping yeah rhymes till theirs no more, like paper shredders-your pre writ text won't be needed or asked for// - merking this no skilled talent-he soon to be ignored, smashing his frame in brutality, turning it to executive shame and wreck his face in full gore// - this was over before it started, after im done me n this kid will have a synonym sense in being coldhearted//(he's dead im mean) - you can't be me-see me-or act me Another fallin executive emcee preposed as a casualty, kid im sick of "weak textcee"s like you-give me "the boss of your faculty"// |
need votes
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still uping for votes please
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yo kautious that first line waz fuckin sick kid!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what waz it?? represent my side and i'll elemetalize your whole crew, when i strike with volts of light you be burning like a holocaust jew//(not racist, sorry if you jewish) yo i aint racsist either but that was fuckin funny!!!!!!!!! good diss man!!!!!!!!!!!!!! like kautious sorry if your affended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the other kat was tight but i would say KAUTIOUS win |
Hmmmokay...........Yo uppin fo' votes..................
lets get this shit over with, thank you kautious for finally postin.......lol good battle |
Yo foreal uppin fo votes, drop a link and i'll hit yo shit up witta poll. drop a poll and recieve a vote on ur battle, thats how its goin down........ again UPPIN
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shit ain't changed.... |
close battle, I gotta break this down...
FLOW=BOTH PUNCHES=RAZ WORDPLAY=BOTH CREATIVITY=BOTH OVERALL=RAZ pretty close battle, but Raz's punches hit harder, so that was the determining factor... VOTE=RAZ check out my battle and drop an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69580 |
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