[Lightweight] eSs.O.S. (4-0) v. Phrantik (1-1)
 

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-G. Hod

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an alias?
im doing 8.

done and waiting.

yea...wait for me....

So...

Everyone Thinks Fran(phran)Will Win,This bitch is Lame wit a Stutter
And Theres no way
Im Losing To A Guy Who's Got the Same Name as My Mother
Im Leavin This Kid Bruised and Battered,Punches'll Ruin his Skin
Fuckin Loser,Bitch Has Hot Flashes that are Cooler Than Him
The Kid Is Shook & eSs is known for Rippin the Rooks
& this Nerd Couldnt Land A Punch,so he Started Hittin The Books
Its Easy Practice,Everyone Bashes On this Wack Guy
Tried Facing The Facts,and Even that Gave him a Black Eye
Weight is Hollow,No Force Behind Ya Fists,So Find The Exit Sign
Cuz ya Weak Verses Get No Props...not even from ya Credit Line
Its A Daily Thing Wit P,If Text Spoke For Itself,It Would've Said It's Weak
Kid ur A Coward,I'd Say Ur Yellow,But Fuck it,Ur The Whole Lemon Tree
Im Comin Full Force Tik,It Would Take A Truck To Stop me
Cause Ya Style Aint Just Ass...It's The Whole Fuckin Donkey
Go Head And Mock me,Imitate Greatness If You've Got The Gaul
Finally Off My Dick
But Like Expert Jugglers This Fag Still Hasnt Dropped The Balls

sorry forgot to attach. i added more cause
kids on rb seem to grade people on the
amount of effort it took, and kid, you were
nothing but another herb to slay.. so i added a lil
bit more...


Ok Ess.. sorry to say, but your time as champ passed
now your droppin light weight, like drinkin slim fast
just give up. . . this kids like the scary, evil loch ness
kids swallowing semen, an they’re yellin “ess, ohh, ess”
now wait.. im wrong… that’s all a play off your old name
kid got a lil scared when you saw rapforce had the same.
Now ill harass you take the name ‘blood’ and tell well
ess o s got raped like a prison crip in a local blood cell.
I don't need to beat you, I'll just stain my clothes instead
& fucking smear Blood to leave him all over this thread.
I don't mean to mock you, bitch, but it isn't that hard
To see there isn't an original punch...
.............................since your fucking verses start!

Vote- tik

Ess: sorry man but I didn't know where you was going with that verse. Ex: The hot flash line. . you should have re-worded. Makes you look like you're calling him hot. Flow was ok. . wordplay was average. Overall man I'm not very impressed. . I dunno maybe you had an off day ?

tik: Nice verse. . what more can I say. . you're improving.

"You go for quantity not quality" - ill Chris

^ It's be nice to get some quotes from the 'vets' on this board. Any hoo..



Nice verse Tik.. glad to see more original punches and disses coming from you.



Nice



bahahaha... nice nice..


Vote - Tik

dick ryders...blah blah blah ...ur ass...and u shouldnt be able to add shit to ur verse after u post but w/e...u still suck...wit ur gay punches

I'm not a dick rider. . you're just whack. Face facts and go back to WW4. And Trigga. . I don't need to quote. . if he wants me to break it all down I will. But until then. Shut the fuck up.

yea yea whatever...funny ur faggot ass was so quick to vote...when u make a thread in general with my name all over it,and then minutes after the verses r posted u come in here...and ur not d'ring him...sure...keep denying ur gayness...and wheres the so called "pink slip" match ur ass was bitching about...since u want me off the site so badly...

We'll get to that. I've been pre-occupied at the moment. With more important things. You act like the net is your life. And I only voted because I was in the forum when tik finally dropped. So don't act like I'm dickriding. Go post the battle on a respectable site if you don't believe me. The outcome will be the same. And with that I'm done clogging the thread.

ummm....
vote...bloodtype
and this shit is why i dont like to vote..
people bitchin about dick ridin...just dont bitch about my vote, i dont know either of them or give a fuck who wins...and sry about all the fukin typos ..its cuz this keyboard need to be pressed really hard and i type fast so it dont fukin wrk......


Everyone Thinks Fran(phran)Will Win,This bitch is Lame wit a Stutter
And Theres no way
Im Losing To A Guy Who's Got the Same Name as My Mother

ok...but i doiubt its true...this line was gay.

Im Leavin This Kid Bruised and Battered,Punches'll Ruin his Skin
Fuckin Loser,Bitch Has Hot Flashes that are Cooler Than Him
i does sound like ur callin him hot but...assumin that ur not (duh) its a good line...and my favorite of this battle

The Kid Is Shook & eSs is known for Rippin the Rooks
& this Nerd Couldnt Land A Punch,so he Started Hittin The Books
ill

Its Easy Practice,Everyone Bashes On this Wack Guy
Tried Facing The Facts,and Even that Gave him a Black Eye
ok

Weight is Hollow,No Force Behind Ya Fists,So Find The Exit Sign
Cuz ya Weak Verses Get No Props...not even from ya Credit Line
good...
Its A Daily Thing Wit P,If Text Spoke For Itself,It Would've Said It's Weak
Kid ur A Coward,I'd Say Ur Yellow,But Fuck it,Ur The Whole Lemon Tree
theres no such thing as a lemon tree. .but average line

Im Comin Full Force Tik,It Would Take A Truck To Stop me
Cause Ya Style Aint Just Ass...It's The Whole Fuckin Donkey
lol
Go Head And Mock me,Imitate Greatness If You've Got The Gaul
Finally Off My Dick
But Like Expert Jugglers This Fag Still Hasnt Dropped The Balls
no.

Ok Ess.. sorry to say, but your time as champ passed
now your droppin light weight, like drinkin slim fast
played. .no good ne more...

just give up. . . this kids like the scary, evil loch ness
kids swallowing semen, an they’re yellin “ess, ohh, ess”
lol

now wait.. im wrong… that’s all a play off your old name
kid got a lil scared when you saw rapforce had the same.
filler. and that bores me.

Now ill harass you take the name ‘blood’ and tell well
ess o s got raped like a prison crip in a local blood cell.
^played^

I don't need to beat you, I'll just stain my clothes instead
& fucking smear Blood to leave him all over this thread.
lol.. cept u messed up the rhyme. shoulda been "...ill just stain my clothes instead&fuckn smear blood to leave him all over threads"..mine rhymes better.

I don't mean to mock you, bitch, but it isn't that hard
To see there isn't an original punch...
.............................since your fucking verses start!
better finisher than he had...but ur verse wasnt as good.

Ess Oh actually came ok in this, a couple decent concepts, he just flipped them/ worded them badly, and that let him down. Tik came w/ the personals and thats pretty much what it came down to, not a bad battle though. .

Vote: Phrantik

tik took this beta all round verse, flow n punches were tight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote-tik