Dezyir (2-2) v. cameronj86 (1-2)
 

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this should be pretty good...this kid is underrated... good luck Cameron...i want to get this done fast. tell me when you check in the soonest you can do it. i say 10 lines, sound good?]


Im more dope than the pope on the rope.

cool whenever you're ready, good luck to you too dezyir, and 10 lines sounds alright I guess....................................

aight............. upppin this thread............. 10 sounds good to me................lemme think of something to drop adn then I'll go..................

This dude must be a "rapper from the past" cuz no-one feels his presence (/present)
He changed his name to "dezyir" but his raps are stil full of "irrelevance"
How can you still be ill when you representing "Tha Regime"
Showin love 4 played fiends like wearing throwbacks of dumb teams
Dezyir paint a picture with words? Come on. This board can't be for be for real
Only time he's an artist is "painting gay sex" to "brush up on his skills"
Read the forums, Dezyir's a brownoser.... Why you ask?
Cuz he kisses so much vet butt his nose gets dirty in their ass
You don't "stand a chance" I make you "sit down," ya weak kid
but at least you can tell Tha Regime in LLL tourneys you "was seated"

Thanks for the 'W' G.Hod, matchin me against this dumb kid,
how do you expect respect,w/a mainstream rapper in ya sig?
Cam gets ripped,punches leave ya face uneven like your bars,
shuttin this fag down swiftly,much like a post bankrupt K-mart,
the best part of your verse was when if finally came to an end,
how do you expect a win?verse was surpassed by my checkin!
..Cameron, there i said it, here comes your 15 minutes of fame,
only time your verse shined is when you mentioned my name,
whos takes the blame for lettin this wack ass kid in from Bermy,
it must of been a mix up..this is the LLL.. not the poetry tourney

i wasnt feeling camerons verse at all, this battle was more toward to ireelevance, heres the layout

punches-irrev
flo-irrev
style-irrev
wordplay-irrev
vocab-irrev
overall-irrev

enuff said....

vote-irev

cameron...

This dude must be a "rapper from the past" cuz no-one feels his presence (/present)
He changed his name to "dezyir" but his raps are stil full of "irrelevance"
was ok...1st bit was ite...2nd was better

How can you still be ill when you representing "Tha Regime"
Showin love 4 played fiends like wearing throwbacks of dumb teams
yeh this was cool...(but regime are ILL lol)

Dezyir paint a picture with words? Come on. This board can't be for be for real
Only time he's an artist is "painting gay sex" to "brush up on his skills"
wordplay could have been used better...but this was funny

Read the forums, Dezyir's a brownoser.... Why you ask?
Cuz he kisses so much vet butt his nose gets dirty in their ass
wack

You don't "stand a chance" I make you "sit down," ya weak kid
but at least you can tell Tha Regime in LLL tourneys you "was seated"
^^^was ok..ite finish

in general nothin really stood out to me man...maybe 5/10


Thanks for the 'W' G.Hod, matchin me against this dumb kid,
how do you expect respect,w/a mainstream rapper in ya sig?
^^^phrantik used a similar line...but it was nice n tru

Cam gets ripped,punches leave ya face uneven like your bars,
shuttin this fag down swiftly,much like a post bankrupt K-mart,
lol orginal...

the best part of your verse was when if finally came to an end,
how do you expect a win?verse was surpassed by my checkin!
it was nice

..Cameron, there i said it, here comes your 15 minutes of fame,
only time your verse shined is when you mentioned my name,
ok...been used before..not played..just not gr8

whos takes the blame for lettin this wack ass kid in from Bermy,
it must of been a mix up..this is the LLL.. not the poetry tourney
lol nice finisher

7/10.....

no offence to u both but ive seen u both do better verses.....but overall i think irrelivance got this...he had harder and more original punches.......

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blah blah blah.....not quoting nuthin .....but in this battle i know
dezyir felt there was really no reason commin hard...so to say..'
i seen better'....will just be a waste of time.....either way...dezyir
did son that cat.....better wordplay and punches.........so he gets
my vote.....1

yea, i've came harder before also, but if i knew I coulda recycled.... I think I would've had better material, you know what i'm talkin bout

every week you have another excuse.

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lol, but i don't hear you denying it do I?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66813

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=dezyir

imma give this to that F.A.G. Dezyir...He basically had betta everything....
both verses were OK but dezyir jus came much harder in my oppinion....

Vote=Dezyir the F.A.G.

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aight...this battle was kinda weak...cameron=u'r verse was aight....but really didn't have hard punches most shit was played..and the flow culda been betta too...dezyir=not a bad verse, pretty good flow...a couple aight punches nuthin too hard also sum played shit but an overall betta verse...i liked the ender...vote=dezyir

Deziyr gets this one thro better pucnhes and worpdlay...both verses were nice tho but i was feelin deziyrs more...peace

fav line of cameron...suppose its aiight-
Dezyir paint a picture with words? Come on. This board can't be for be for real
Only time he's an artist is "painting gay sex" to "brush up on his skills"

fav line of deziyr...hot-

..Cameron, there i said it, here comes your 15 minutes of fame,
only time your verse shined is when you mentioned my name,


vote-deziyr