Deceit vs fine_fellow
 

10-15 lines, no hate votes, no dick rydin' and fuck you

Destruction is easy, gunshot's make you levitate/1
Bitches like you don't deserve to be heavyweight/2
This Bitch is wack, have to imply devine intervention,/3
You rhymes so bad their beyond comprehension,/4
You probly don't know what that means, just a bad assumption,/5
So before you rate my shit, make sure to stop the presumptions,/6
I'm not hesitant, make you crack, i'm belligerent,/7
You're shiverin', i'm slitherin' my nine ain't kiddin'/8
You provin' you're useless, must be drunk on some,/9
Your rhymes are simple like one plus one,/10
I ready for whatever break any skill you had,/11
I'm not a wrestler but i put your girl in the boston crab,/12
You should give up cuz i'm too strong, take your time to correct/13
I come at you with a knife cuz i'm a pain in your neck/14

Deceit in a attempt to be hard, sucked then ate his boy-friends meat (dick)//
All because in his schooling he got taught, you are what you eat//
My punches come from all directions, like a mirror when it shatters//
Only way you elevating is if your skills depended on a game of snakes and ladders//
Your punches are like azn people's height the way they fall short evey time//
Not even Jesus could turn your wackness into a dope rhyme//*
This cat going against me and thinking he can win, must be X-He-On//
He dribbles into a cup of whiskey then drinks it, jus' so his spits can be strong//
This herb shows his wins, thinking that it might make him look more iller and elite//
The way i fire punches, and hit you deceit, you so cold, i'm meltin you with heat//

By the way, this motherfucker told me he copied this rap and andjusted it, talk about fuckin' bitin'

I resent that this rap came straight from the heart 88888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 88888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 88888888888888888888

If it's actually yours English Bitch, tell me what X is, or what a herb is, or why you put an asterisk next to the jesus line, or what elevatin' means? I know you're a posh English dick who doesn't know this slang, so go ahead and tell me...

i will not lower myself to your level, i suggest you consult a dictionary. yyyyyyooooooooooouuuuuuuu ssssssssmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeelllllllllllllllllllll

Look at that, he speaks refined, and look at any of his older posts, his raps suck dick, now look at this, it's obviously not him, i've got this bitch on my MSN, now would i say that if it weren't true? He fuckin' told me he'd copy......He would write in the 'Queen's English' but all of a sudden he sounds like he knows how to rap, you Dick Rydin, bitin', pussy ass faggot, fuck you, Suck Dick motherfucker...

HAHAHAHA
Hey yo, fine_fellow, middle class bitch, you prolly play the cello,
You fell over yourself, rich kid, get back to readin Othello,
This aint you domain, so dont claim that you know pain,
No one says 'chaps', your rap is way too plain,
Yo, im english, dont let fellow rep us, we aint the same,
Im gonna fuckin place a tumour on his brain,
Me n Deciet are giants, and your rap is fuckin shit,
You're so small, you wear stilsts to suck a midgets dick,
You a bitch, the only way you'll make it is as a prison snitch, im dope,
You'd like that wouldnt u? havtin to bend and get the fuckin soap :P
And before you say it, i aint homophobic, I just reverted to your level of language, your startin to choke n coughin,
So you can understand these last few words you hear before you end up sandwiched between oak, in a coffin.

Peace out

i think deceit got this he came harder wit the punches and he had good structure,

big ups to u both though

vote=deceit

Safe, thanks for the vote, and as standard: Fuck you 'fine_fellow' fucking pussy............
Uppin' fo more votes...

deceit got it he was just better in every catagory


he will u go drop a honest vote here thanx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2506#post662506

deciet got this in every catagory....punches, flow, structure, and so on

hit dis up wit an honest vote
i'm winnin 4-1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69153

Thanks, all of you, i didn't expect the votes, this was stupid, fine_fellow was just a bitch...

Uppin fo more, lets finish this............

i'm gonna agree wit j-killa u got this this shit easily

vote=decit

j-killa what krew do u rep

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