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GL0CKPUSHAK47 07-28-03 05:34 PM

Tha Day Breaks Out...
 
Imma tell yall a story of a day that turns around fast.......


Sometimes you have tah take matters in your own hands/
Like a day beyond days thats not simple as sittin on tha can/
A story i will tell that may happen again one day/
Its very different like someone would be "oh you dont say"/
Takin a ride in tha whip wit my boyz in tha month of may/
Chillen back tah tha tunes when tha sun sits and lay/
Caddi rolls by wit tinted to dark to see through/
Window rolls down quarter way to see eyes flash wit blue/
My crew and I hold tha heat close to tha abdominal/
Biggie says "tha gun rest unda tha vest" as we past tha terminal/
As I lay sight on there car tha glimmer of a glock shines/
I pull my heat and yell "whip got heat" and everyone flies/
Speeds go up to stay up as shots ring out through blocks/
Both sides are taking alot but i know all it takes is 1 straight shot *pop*/
I aim fo da driver that be duckin that I huntin/
Pull duel Glocks out imprinted GlockPusha they will be nuthin/
As i sqeeze da trigga his eyes let loose/
Tha bullet leaves fast, too fast tah see imprinted Duece/
Driver is hit and there whip spins out of control and shit/
Explosions light up tha night as we accelerate an dip/
Tah this day i wouldnt know if that bullet didnt hit/
Victims could of been us in flames burned to zip/
But you know these days come an go fo many heads/
Tha count of rare acations like this end in death/

GL0CKPUSHAK47 07-29-03 04:14 AM

dam peeeps be sleepin on drops round here.....

murda_mistress 07-29-03 12:29 PM

Naw I got ya it was a nice spit I liked it

Face Off 07-29-03 04:14 PM

dis was a good imagery.......

iight flow....overall pretty good
put sum multies n metas in it

keep elevatin........
Deuce

just up dat vocab!!!!

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GL0CKPUSHAK47 07-29-03 05:07 PM

thanx fo feedback yall....

Pistol Pete 07-29-03 06:29 PM

nice drop

C-Section 07-29-03 06:44 PM

^^^wow pistol pete that was a great reply!

you need to work on your flow, i knew what you were saying but the flow was throwing everything off.

and i understand you were making a story but try to make it orignal that was boring because everyone does stories about gangster shoot outs. its nothing new..

GL0CKPUSHAK47 07-30-03 02:47 AM

yuh i gotch u i usually so abstrakt drops that are not all bout dat shi u know still uppin....

~*Premey*~ 07-30-03 08:16 AM

This was pretty good but I think u should put a little more wordplay in there

And da flow need 2 go with what ever vocab u use

But it was good overall

GL0CKPUSHAK47 07-30-03 08:15 PM

^^thanx yo uppin....

ManOwaR 07-31-03 06:07 AM

it was ok... you need to work on being more descriptive... and work on tha wordplay alot... this coulda been way better....

peace...

Split-eyez 07-31-03 07:48 AM

nice drop but I think you coulda use betta vocab...
anywayz, I liked it...
keep elevating

7/10
peace

GL0CKPUSHAK47 08-01-03 01:10 AM

word uppin...


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