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What?!?!
Your Too Abstract....Not Appealing
Wheres Your Battle Record Whys It 0-0...I Dont Get You Man Its Not What Im Feeling Im A Poet Asshole! Who The Fuck Are You To Get To Judgeing? I Look To The Sky And Hear Nothin But Bird Chirps As I Conduct My Daily Word Search Displaying The Gift To Work Nerves Cause Your Getting On Mine..... Im Like Thirty Percent Game Lyrics Reflection Ten Over Your Head The Only Exception Mollesting The Alphabet Catching Cases Like A Center Fielder Recognize Me Playa Like I Look Familiar On Point Blazin In Your Secret Cypher As A Sacred Street Writer With Mad Lines Amongst This Concrete Jungle Illness Makes Me Up Like Foundation To Leave You Nothing To Fall Back On Lifting The Concrete From You ~Content~ The Hollow Man With A Sixth Sense Steppin Through Crews Like A Hollogram Helpin A Beat Out Like A Sick Friend You Need One Like Child Abuse Victims Forreal Trill I Could Put An Acapella Cd Out And Still Be The Real Deal You Continue Trying To Magic Touch What You Cant Feel If Your Mother Would Have Had An Abortion I Would Travel Back In Time To Be Extremely Supportive Your Hearts Porcelin With A Spout And Fruit Punch............ |
Open Mic Members Dont Reply
Like Poetic Scriptures With A Return Reply To Others Threads So If You Post Something And Reply To Nobody Dont Expect To Get Replies...... |
Reply To Those Who Gave
Lengthly Comments On Your Shit If Your Egos Bruised By One Person Your A Bitch Its Merely A Touch Of Constrctive Criticism |
Maybe It Was Your Structure.. But I Didn't See Any Apparent Flow After Reading It 2 Times... Maybe It Was Intended...
Wasnt Feeling It.. Either You're Too Deep.. Or I'm Waay To Lazy To Look Hard Into It... I'm Guessing You Firing Back At The People That Call You Too Abstract And Wack Because You Have A 0-0 Record? Parts Of This Had Alright Execution... Like I Look Familiar On Point Blazin In Your Secret Cypher As A Sacred Street Writer ^Liked That For Some Reason... Thats It! |
Too Lazy..Honestly..Wish I Could Hook Up Audio
All You Have To Do Is Read If You Cant Depict The Second Part Your Really Just Lazy.... Peace |
^I Am Lazy... Download Acid Pro 4 Or Cool Edit... Grab A Mic From Wal-Mart Or Some Shit... Make This Audio.. And Make Me Feel Stupid
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LOL @ inspire sorry son i had the same problem he did. needs work and mics are like 5 bucks and i know you got a set of headphones laying around the house get ghetto hunny
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No You Need To Learn To Follow A Verse
Sixth Sense..Sick Friend Hollow man..Hallogram Abortion...Supportive..Porcelin Center Fielder...Familiar Reflection....Exception Look For Those Words..It s Not Hard If You Can Fuckin Read For Two Minutes....you Must Have ADD And Read Then Go....Hmmm...Fishing Lets Go Fishing...This Isnt Rocket Science.... Nor Abstract For Dummies.... Concrete Jungle..Concrete From You |
^Meh... I See It... But It Just Didn't Appeal
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