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Krem vs $$create$$
10 - 20 lines max
20 d/r vots no crew votes no hater votes first to 5 wins i fucked up the first set up, but whatever drop here, you wanna spit first? |
aight yo check it...
Your name is backwards just like your battle record/ Maybe that's why you're gettin "merk"ed so keep doin ya thing an' shake-ya-tail-feather/ Look at your avartar man, or are you too blind to see/ Your bitch is 2 years old...to young for you or for me/ It thats your bitch's teddy in your hand or are u just tryin to get head b?/ Yo chek it this dude from the maritimes/ I will rip him apart like he is Time!/ (time magazine) And his reputation will be on an incline/ '-. I cant believe he asked me to spit 1st when he has 249 posts on this site/ Its 'cause ya scared mothafucka now where's ya' night-light??/ I also cant believe why he wanted to challenge/ Cuz i dissed him in cypher he shaking like a rusty door hinge/ aight spit |
ayo, i'm a dawg and i'm bout to eat this cat/
bitch you can't run, you to damn whack// i'm gonna cut of your legs and de-feet you// you can't win this battle, you know i'm gonna beat you// i'm a leave you poor cause you make no cents// your gonna be hurtin sore, cause this battle's intense// when you battle me you get burned cause i'm acidity// your whack at rappin, and you should give up if ur askin me// bitch you can't get a girl cause they give you cock block// so you gotta stick with your hand and a plain white sock// you rhymes are like a baby talking or crying// you don't understand them...but ya keep on trying// change your name to i blow and can't get a date// stop goin for girls dawg, you gay you ain't straight// meh |
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up this this ...... let the best man win this battle....... uppin 4 some votes..... peace out...... T4L |
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seemed like a pre-write but whatever....uppin for votes............................................. ....
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My vote=Krem better flow and punchlines but close battle good spit tho create
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ok thx i still think it was pre-written cuz not 1 punch was directed at me...anyways still uppin for votes.....peace
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create got this siht won, his punches were hit dead on and the flow needs work but ti was really good.
vote-create i can't poll as you can see so just drop what you think here, don't have to poll: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69549 |
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uppin 3rd time.....letz get a fuckin vote in here.......................................peace.. ........................
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uppin 4th time.....NEED VOTES.............if u vote on r's krem will vote on urs if u drop a link....aight thx....peace
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come on here people this is my last uppin
we need some votes up in ths motha fucka peace >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |
Easy merk by Krem...
Better wordplay, more effective punches. Flow was there... The other cat is definately just getting started. Try and make every line a punch. Ya setting up punches with the fist line of a bar then hitting with the second line is cool. Reads nice. But when ya opponent hits ya with every line that's he's pretty much doubled ya punch output. I oughta know... I loved setting up punches back in the day but I eventually learned to stop that and hit with every line. |
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