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Verbatim 07-29-03 11:52 AM

Krem vs $$create$$
 
10 - 20 lines max
20 d/r vots
no crew votes
no hater votes
first to 5 wins

i fucked up the first set up, but whatever
drop here, you wanna spit first?

$$CrEaTe$$ 07-29-03 06:29 PM

aight yo check it...
Your name is backwards just like your battle record/
Maybe that's why you're gettin "merk"ed so keep doin ya thing an' shake-ya-tail-feather/

Look at your avartar man, or are you too blind to see/
Your bitch is 2 years old...to young for you or for me/
It thats your bitch's teddy in your hand or are u just tryin to get head b?/

Yo chek it this dude from the maritimes/
I will rip him apart like he is Time!/ (time magazine)
And his reputation will be on an incline/ '-.

I cant believe he asked me to spit 1st when he has 249 posts on this site/
Its 'cause ya scared mothafucka now where's ya' night-light??/

I also cant believe why he wanted to challenge/
Cuz i dissed him in cypher he shaking like a rusty door hinge/

aight spit

Verbatim 07-29-03 07:16 PM

ayo, i'm a dawg and i'm bout to eat this cat/
bitch you can't run, you to damn whack//
i'm gonna cut of your legs and de-feet you//
you can't win this battle, you know i'm gonna beat you//
i'm a leave you poor cause you make no cents//
your gonna be hurtin sore, cause this battle's intense//
when you battle me you get burned cause i'm acidity//
your whack at rappin, and you should give up if ur askin me//
bitch you can't get a girl cause they give you cock block//
so you gotta stick with your hand and a plain white sock//
you rhymes are like a baby talking or crying//
you don't understand them...but ya keep on trying//
change your name to i blow and can't get a date//
stop goin for girls dawg, you gay you ain't straight//

meh

Verbatim 07-29-03 07:34 PM

uppin ......
up this this ......
let the best man win this battle.......
uppin 4 some votes.....
peace out......
T4L

Verbatim 07-29-03 08:14 PM

uppin............................................. ...
need some votes here....
peace out................
T4L............

$$CrEaTe$$ 07-29-03 09:38 PM

seemed like a pre-write but whatever....uppin for votes............................................. ....

Ovadoze 07-29-03 09:55 PM

My vote=Krem better flow and punchlines but close battle good spit tho create
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$$CrEaTe$$ 07-29-03 10:01 PM

ok thx i still think it was pre-written cuz not 1 punch was directed at me...anyways still uppin for votes.....peace

Slacker 07-29-03 10:05 PM

create got this siht won, his punches were hit dead on and the flow needs work but ti was really good.

vote-create

i can't poll as you can see so just drop what you think here, don't have to poll:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69549

Verbatim 07-29-03 10:30 PM

uppin............................................. ............
for more votes..........................
peace.........................

Verbatim 07-29-03 11:07 PM

uppin .............................
for................
more.........
votes....................
peace....

$$CrEaTe$$ 07-29-03 11:23 PM

uppin 3rd time.....letz get a fuckin vote in here.......................................peace.. ........................

$$CrEaTe$$ 07-30-03 12:09 AM

uppin 4th time.....NEED VOTES.............if u vote on r's krem will vote on urs if u drop a link....aight thx....peace

Verbatim 07-30-03 12:28 AM

come on here people this is my last uppin
we need some votes up in ths motha fucka
peace
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Born To Kill 07-30-03 10:11 AM

Easy merk by Krem...

Better wordplay, more effective punches.
Flow was there...

The other cat is definately just getting started.
Try and make every line a punch.
Ya setting up punches with the fist line of a bar then hitting with the second line is cool.
Reads nice.
But when ya opponent hits ya with every line that's he's pretty much doubled ya punch output.
I oughta know...
I loved setting up punches back in the day but I eventually learned to stop that and hit with every line.


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