my life is over
 

I cant take it no more im ready to leave, it seems the worlds problems are on my sleeve, a wise man said if you believe then you can achieve, but i been believing but not "contempt" with what im recieving, wish i was "exempt" from even breathing, ready to die for any reason, my problems change with the change of each season, it seems my whole life ive been bleeding, living in "torture" the devil keeps on preceeding telling me ill "support ya"

He has my brain spinning i got a concussion, the devil and God is arguing but the devil is winning the discussion, so i keep on sinning im ready for my reprocussion, even if it "means" my existence, i see demons in my "dreams"fuc resistance, the devil has taken me with the same ol "schemes" and persistance,

My only hope is reincarnation, or restoration, but its hard to cope with my destination, failed every expectation, i been ready for my expiration,it is what i well deserved, already got my place in hell reserved, so i wonder why my life is steady perserved???

Im getting my self "prepared" cause i know that hells hot, trying not to be "scared" or shell shocked,thinking back I was deprived as a baby wasnt well rocked, now im facing the devils grin, my lungs are pacing my levels end, my brain is tracing my life of sin, my life was over before it even could begin...
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Tight multis, but i thought some seemed forced...

overall good drop, it felt deep, keep it up..........................

nice multis,good rythm,pretty much what flatline said,keep droppin,~1~

I Enjoyed Reading This. Excellent Multis.....Keep Spittin....
Elevate Just Like The Rest Of Us. Try Using Different Flows And Expand Vocab A little. Nice Peice...

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Thanks for the comments and help on my elevating
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