CarsonJet -v- KrImZeN KiLLa
 

5 barz
20 minutes to drop-start from set up....
(eliminates who spits first bullshit)
all other normal rules.....

no need to chek in..jus drop in 20

KrImZeN KiLLa

5 barz-

Yo Krimzin Killa notha' bita of vanilla~tryna act up like he be a illa killa//
But I murk dis kat like his label'd color~heres anotha~I could drop u wit my fill-a's//

aight...murk'n Jet style....

lines strecthed like aerobic spit labelled shit but who am i ta nit pik dis prick//
Im I.L.L your simply sick as in green from sailor dik's//
musta been a long trip-n-rip for all em white cap'd washin hiks//

u stepped wit da wrong vet~leave ya spit strepped try an reply but ya spit be hit inept//
u drop like kordel stewart'no respect~an when u try an toss ya verse dey simply inta-cept//

what u get...fo fukin wit diviner' intalekt's

Must be a 'crotch rocket' the way Im 'burnin Dis White Rice'//
Beat me? Betta odd's droppin 5 snake eye's~wit 10 dice~twice//

Sikka droppin nice'fuk mag's~ima infest u like head lice//
steady dicintagratin dis Kat~like a batch of Mad'Cow infected Mice//

your late......

dont agree to rules if u cant hang wit it....
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I AGREE

BUT DONT HAVE THIS CLOSED YET I WANNA SEE HIS DROP

and carson who do you ask about changing the heavyweight shit

like yours says ILL/ alliance

i want mine changed

Nigga your best beat is to put your mic on mute and just keep silent..before I make you choke on yours words and I start to get violent //
My skill to yours is like Master Splinter to the Mutant Turtles..your still playing hop scotch while I'm jumpin hurdles //
How do you think you have the skill to battle this heavy weight? When my punches are knockin you from state to state //
Don't debate..your lyrically endangered..your styles so far back your still written your shit with a rock and slate //
This shits gettin ugly..fuck that..this shit is fuckin grusome..I'ma write you some better punches lines to have and you need to use em! //
I'm long and lasting with High Endurance like Old Spice..my shits rippin you apart with each punch real nice //
I rip styles on da mic so fast it would make ya head spin and break ya neck..you need to realize that I'ma da rap genius..come in check //
Your sweet dawg you ain't no hard thug..I'll punch ya till I break ya jaw while you just cry and give shoulder shrugz //
Bitch just retire your name and elevate your game..sign back on RB and try to put a newb to shame..//
But if you come back with your rap game da same..get ready for another lose...as to this battle the win I claim //

da fuck i aint late i still got 3 minutes................
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naw u were actually 3 minutes late:but shit i aint worried bout 3 minutes...woulda been pissed if it was like an hour or two..but u dropped...no beef...

UPPIN for votes now.....

and synikill...u can change that in your profile...it gives u a box to type in if u have enuff posts...

how many posts u need?????????
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HOW MAN YPOSTS"S


sorry to frree post

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do you know how many

^^lol keep free-postin..ur almost there....
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carsonjet -

- good intro. great multies and good personal disses

lines strecthed like aerobic spit labelled shit but who am i ta nit pik dis prick//
Im I.L.L your simply sick as in green from sailor dik's//
musta been a long trip-n-rip for all em white cap'd washin hiks//

^^^ nice lines! good multies and personals again! thats what battlin is about

- nice kordel stewart metaphor

Must be a 'crotch rocket' the way Im 'burnin Dis White Rice'//
Beat me? Betta odd's droppin 5 snake eye's~wit 10 dice~twice//

^^^ HOT HOT HOT!!!

- not bad closer... but not best line.

KrImZeN KiLLa -

- i dont agree with the use of 'nigga' on the internet...
- good rhyme in first line
- lol you rhymed about ninja turtles
- you are talking about your rhymes, your this and your that. you should put more emphasis on the dissing opponent
- I, I, I, I, thats all i see!!!

Bitch just retire your name and elevate your game..sign back on RB and try to put a newb to shame..//

^^^ best line

- not bad closer too!

Vote: carson. better verse.

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