B.R.E. Presents: "?"
 

[Verse 1]

Am I The Most Hated On This Earth Cuz I Was Born With The Sickest-Mind//
With-Rhymes So-Tight That You Need The Jaws-Of-Life To Dechiper-Lines?//
Steady Making The Fame-Climb, Fucking People Straight, Like I Just Raped-Their-Spine?//
Or Is It That I Am So-Fine That I Tend To Make The Biggest Haters-Cry//
Making Them Wish That Instead Of Their Business Skills They Lyrically Had-Mine?//
Emptying My Demons From Deep-Within, Making Mafia Hitmen- Cringe//
It Could Only-Be-Me , The Way I Make People Wanna Drown Their-Kids//
Making Grown Men Slit Their-Wrists...The Textbook Reason For-Censorship//
The Kid That Stay Up For With No-Sleep For-Weeks, Delving The Mind's-Deep//
Trying To Be-Concrete For Kid's-Physche, But It Comes Out As A Big "Bleep"//
Making Sailors Turn Their Heads Wondering Where I Learned-Words Like-These//
Am I A Bad Influence To Kids Of-Three Of Four, Am I Ruinng Young-Homes?//
Making Kids Where Baggy-Clothes And-Go From Next On Seasme Street To "The Next-Episode"//
Causing Thoughts Of Suicide At-Night, With-Ropes Around Their-Throats//
Jumping From Their Bed-Post And Laughing As The Line Goes Straight, Their Little Necks-Break//
Its A Gift, Its Words Can-Make Someone-Great Then Explain To Me, Why The-Hate?//

[Hook]
Why! (Do You Hate Me?)
Why! (Do You Hate Me?)
Why! (Must You Break Me?)
Why! (Must You Break Me?)

[Verse 2]
Am I Devil In-Diguise In That-Why You Simply-Deny That Im-Alive And Hope That Ill Regain My-Mind?//
Or Do You Hope That Im A-Figment Of Hate And-Crime And-Cry That I Rap With My Skin Full With Pigment?//
Or Do You Just Oppress Me, And Try To-Assess My-Weakness...Non Existant, There'll be No-Success//
Can Have-Skill? And Actually Express What I-Feel Through Words, Not Through Those I-Kill And Sex-Appeal?//
Or Are These Foreign Thoughts, Ones That Never-Occured, Did You Just Assume Thats I-Curse And Slur-Words?//
That With Each-Verse I Let A Piece Of My Soul-Through To All-You To Be Felt-Through, But Instead You All-Boo?//
And Scream-Obscenities In Attempts At Stopping-Me? But Instead You Power-Me And My Urge For-Controversy?//
That Blood Not Ink Runs Through This-Pen? The Insanity Will-Begin But Once The-Sin Leaks Out, I Begin To Breathe-Again?//
My World Can Go Up In-Smoke With My Will To Live-Revoked, But I Can Live On These Words I-Spoke And Caffiene-Alone//
That I Can Wake Up And Want To Die More-Then-Before But I Pop In An Album And My Drive Is Again-Restored?//
Or Is It Impossible For You To Undstand These-Words? Suddenly Its-Absurd For These To Heal-Hurt So Instead You Kick-Dirt?//
This Is Self-Eprexssion, And Does Not Lead To Lead-Penitration, Big Fat-Ejaculations Or Gang Jumping-Initations//
Why Cant You Realize That These Are The Words I Live-Through, Breath-Through And Ultimately Scream "Fuck-You!"//

[Hook]
Why! (Do You Hate Me?)
Why! (Do You Hate Me?)
Why! (Must You Break Me?)
Why! (Must You Break Me?)

[Verse 3]
Is This Too Much To-Grasp, Does It Slip Right Through Your-Hands?//
Or Do You Let Drop My Life-Plans And Watch It Shatter Like Bits Of-Glass//
Is It All From Your Pent Up Rage, And Like An Aminal-Caged You Wanna Kick-Ass?//
Or Is It In oh-7, Ill Be Making The Most-Cash And Be Dropping Out As Last-In-Class?//
And I Dont Have To-Try For The Rest Of My-Life Cuz I Can-Rhyme And Cash Pulls A Hott-Wife//
I Take This Hott-Knife, And I Dig Into Your Soft-Points, I Got From A White-Boy, To MTV's First-Choice//
Making The Record Labels Come-Up With-Something To Put Above-Platinum//
Cuz Ya Best Believe Any Challenge Ill Be The First To Meet-Um//
Find The Highest Selling Point In History And Then Beat-Um//
Can I Really-Express How Much This Burns At Absolute-Best?//
How To Stay Apart From The-Rest. But Still Selling Albums By The-Gs//
This-Adversady Wieghs Down On-Me, T0 The Point Where Its-Hurting Me//
But I Will Not-Weep, And Ill COme Back More Angry And Make CEOS Have Plastic-Surgery//
For Not Signing-Me...Not Buying-Me? Ok...Thats Fine With-Me//
But We'll See How Much Your Accepting-Me When My-Salary Fixes The-Economy//

[Hook]
Why! (Do You Hate Me?)
Why! (Do You Hate Me?)
Why! (Must You Break Me?)
Why! (Must You Break Me?)
[repeat x4]

omg.....Hot Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
Damnnnnnnnnnn , u stayed on level through the whole piece...Damn dawg....That shit was blazing , Ur wordplay played a big role in this piece , for example... Am I Devil In-Diguise In That-Why You Simply-Deny That Im-Alive And Hope That Ill Regain My-Mind?//
Or Do You Hope That Im A-Figment Of Hate And-Crime And-Cry That I Rap With My Skin Full With Pigment?//
^^^All i gotta say is Hot Damnnnnnnnnn......Wordplay was HOT
Ur Vocab was sick , u had some strong words in there , Ask for Metaphors u had a good amount of them..But this drop was still sick....I liked da tittle...."?''.....Hot...Overall u get a 10/10.....Nice way too rep Fam

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yo dawg dam nthis shit was hottt the whole first verse was off the charts man blowin niggas up with this shit 9/10 keep this shit up dawg.

wut was this about??? was it just you displaying yourself??? was there a storyline to it??? Pretty much all you accomplished was that you told all tha haters fuck you. Okay. This was peice was alright lyrically i give it to you your vocab, wordplay, and how you structured it was nice as hell......but i like things that have good purpose and meaning to it......rather than just shakin the haters off you......although that is fun........

nah this song was to pretty much sayin anything to anyone whos ever doubted me for any reason

this was pretty good. you had some nice lines but its kind of basic. its the type of thing that would sound better in an audio. but everything was there. if flowed nice, and you had good vocab.

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very good.....you had me really into it just a few bars into the first verse.......the multis were impressive, the whole piece flowed well, it was enjoyable to read.......

damn good drop it really brought u into it right away ur flow was good n the sturcture was excellent, i give it ta ya with ur wordplay n vocab, the whole piece flowed rathr well it was a good read, the first verse was "off the charts" as withersman said, all in all hell of a drop n a good read keep spittin


..resp..

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This said it .....the verse didnt really have a topic that stuck with it..............nice lyrical skills....it was an allright drop.........funny to see your reppin bre after you said that you got to good fot them and went to warlords.ahh well

Verses were nice... good wordplay... decent vocab, nothing too flashy... but, I just am not feelin' the chorus... Do you have this song in audio? That's the only way I can judge the chorus... other than that... everything was on point...

One word Tight.