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just my first audio drop on the site ...gimme some feedback ...if u want check the others to if u want...hit me back wit feedback thanx...PEACE....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/my5t3rymusic.htm

let's see...

yeah hooks nice, good flow, lyrics wer heavy.

Listn'd to sum of the others. can tell your lookin for an eminm style, that's aight.

Take in my Copy Run track, might suit your style.

thanx....uppin

UPPIN

Ok, of course he's going for the Eminem stlye he has no choice he's white!!!??!!

Anyway, You lyrics are definately on point, but the "opie" in your voice is what kills it for me. The flow is shakey, but I think thats from readin it. More feeling please, make us feel what you sayin. Good effort, kudos to ya chick too (gotta pic) lol just kiddin, but for real I know you gotta pic...ha ha gotcha again...but I'm sayin though........

ight thanx..and yea i got pics...all for me ...HA...and yea u no all us white people just have eminem styles...i guess its just in our genes or somethin...lol..righhhttt....

i dont think you sound like eminem, i think its just a similar style.....but anyway, your delivery was off at the beginning, but you caught your flow like 5 seconds after, so dats good.....ummm i wasn't really feelin the hook to this, i thought it was weak, and your girl ain't really add emotion to it....you pause in your verses a little bit....i kinda noticed it...try not to do dat as much, cuz it throws you off your flow and course of beat.....but stay up, this was a good drop...OnE



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