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BloodType:FU 07-31-03 09:53 AM

An Eye On The Page(The Other on the Clock)
 
Animated in Imagination,Fascinated wit the Ordinary
Rich in Heart & Mind,Still my Pockets are Poor as Pennies
For More,The Merry,The Score,Too Heavy To Settle Alone
So Along With Companions,I Pack up & Set To get on the Road
From Head to Toes,Neck and Nose,Equipped To Set My Mark
in Wild Terrains,Jungles,Suburbia,all the Way from Central Park
Escapin Every Day Cycles,Exploring The New and UnDiscovered
Tho The Deadliest of Secrets Stay a Hidden Cloth Under Covers
Devious Lies From Previous Nights,as Sin Camoflauges Itself
A Man With Too much Pride Succombs & Dodges his Wealth
Opposites Dealt,a Similiar Card,A Journey Through the Vinegar Yards
& Keepin My Head up High Is What Keeps My Enemies Charged
Entities Large,A Prophecy ForSaken,Replaced With Dire Rage
A Faded Book,Writing Original Phrases on an Expired Page
A Firy Day,Rain From Above,Yet Clouds Are Non Existent,Still
Lost All Control,im Motionless,Forced to Watch My Instincts Kill
an Instant Thrill,Bystanders Watch as Time Runs off the Clock
Portraying Christ,i Tread The Seas,One Foot Comes off The Rocks
the Point to this Story...It Has None,So Try To Find It
& u'll Wind Up Counting down ur Minutes...Much Like My Life Is

So What If my Wife was Isis and Items Really Were Priceless
what if,I Could See The Future Of Mankind Through My Eyelids
Whats the Use of Asking What If,Cause You Can Ask But It's
Pretty Useless,Cause What If's are Questions After the Suffix
So fuck Questions...Im on a Quest,I Never Will Honor Death
Gone With The Wind and All its Dirt & whats a Goner's Respect?
I Father The Best,Guide Those Willing To Be Taught
Dont Think Ur Soul Holds No Price,Believe,U Can Be Bought
1st to Speak,Second Fiddle,Never,My Hands...Holding Time
As My Name...Brands The Minds,More Than Clothing Lines
Keep Intact,With My Backround,Ancestors,Im Aware
I'll Give You A Dollar for my Thoughts,With a Dime to Spare
Crime is There,Wherever u Lay Ur Eyes,I Find It Ugly
With All The Sites i Bare Witness To,I Say the Blind are Lucky
Why Would You Love Me,Im Evil By My Own Consent
Thankin Me at the same time,My Welcome at home is Spent
My Dome is Bent,Scars and all Remind me of Battles Lost
A Gentleman or Warrior?,Do i Hold My Hat or Sword?
I Scatter Off,Into Space,Thoughts off the Wall,Never Mind em
Carded for Execution...
I Let My Words Run Wild,Because In Minutes...My Life's Done

CasalenA 07-31-03 09:54 AM

hot shit dawg

liked the flow alot

can u return the favour and peep this please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69865

honest vote man

Orikle 07-31-03 11:12 AM

Shit...This Was Fucken Nice Blood....Fuck Jeah...Feelin It For Sure..You Write Well...These Were Dope!...

Entities Large,A Prophecy ForSaken,Replaced With Dire Rage
A Faded Book,Writing Original Phrases on an Expired Page
&
So What If my Wife was Isis and Items Really Were Priceless
what if,I Could See The Future Of Mankind Through My Eyelids
Whats the Use of Asking What If,Cause You Can Ask But It's
Pretty Useless,Cause What If's are Questions After the Suffix
So fuck Questions...Im on a Quest,I Never Will Honor Death

This Was Fucking Dope...Kept Me Reading For Sure...Legends???...

BloodType:FU 07-31-03 11:38 PM

uppin...people be sleepin on my shit on this site

BloodType:FU 08-03-03 09:49 AM

^^^^^^^^

ManOwaR 08-04-03 05:02 AM

nice wordplay and interesting plot... you got a strong solid flow too... overall good shit...

keep writing and exciting...

peace...


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