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R-Dot-Capone vs. Slim Lanky
U know the rules... let see what you got! Good luck
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aight checkin in
i'll spit in a bit... ............................................ ................................................. |
The way i'm beating this kid i'll be tracked by social services/
R-Dot's the lyrical legend. Slim is just the herb in this/ I'm jerking this dick until he spits the verbal semen i deposited/ In his throat so he could be sick... Lyrically i'm HIV positive/ Severing Limbs. Imagine Me Losing Against Nothing/ Kick Your ass. Ur claiming that ur hot... yeah ur fronting/ (check the 1st 9 words... spell out his name... prove its a keystyle) R-Dot 2 hot. I type through this shit and send sparks/ What made u think u could match 2 me when u been on since March/ And got an 0-1 record. U trying 2 stand up 2 me/ Is like Eminem trying 2 get a standing ovation from Christopher Reeve/ Ur going against a lyrical god that had this win from the start/ Ur more like a viagra patient. Ur just trying 2 come on hard/ Kid ur wack. Verbally i could rip ur crack/ Split ur back. Like a virgin's first time this pussy won't leave intact/ U should retract ur challenge. It's obvious u was never my match/ 'Cause when it comes 2 raps u can't see me like a cyclops wearing an eyepatch/ |
wasn't my best....
i'm working my way out of writer's back..... figure the best way is 2 keep going even if i get a few losses along the way.......................................... |
Nice verse, R-DOT to bad your tryin to be something your not//
Your almost as bad as Shaq on the line takin a foul shot// The “Lyric legend” you say your game so bad, you coundnt sell on ebay// It is kinda of funny how it works this way a white kid kick in your ass all day// You wanna jerk this dick? What you think I got the magic stick//? I aint 50 but I know my shit I wil crush you like an ant and may you sick// So you want to step to this I can beat you in 4 lines like my nickname was k-swiss// Ill leave you drownin in a lyrical oceanic abyss// You are almost as Bad as Eminem and Elton John holding hands your fuckin gay// You are all like ill jerk guys dicks all day sorry but I don’t swing that way// Growin up in NY i am surprised your still alive// I am sure you have to hide because we all know you like to ride//(guys dicks) It is like you on a cereal box you “silly faggot dicks are for chicks”// Well I am almost done, my new record will soon be 1-1// Thanks to you my career has begun and I have won// So here it is to sum it up R-dot likes it when men touch his g-spot// So there was my plot A fag who thinks he is good and…….shit I forgot// |
Heres how I break it down
MULTIES - NONE WORDPLAY- NONE FLOW- R-Dot Capone by far --- "The way i'm beating this kid i'll be tracked by social services/ R-Dot's the lyrical legend. Slim is just the herb in this/"- Nice Line STYLE- Slim_Lanky --- No matter how bad his grammar is, he still had rhymes everywhere. Slim this wasnt decent just keep elevating I think you need to work on your grammar the most. Before you send your verse reread it and make sure it makes sense. "I aint 50 but I know my shit I wil crush you like an ant and may you sick". That is what I mean. Capone- Your started out decent. Just keep it all that way. GREAT opening. Keep it like that and you will be a force to reckon with here on RB. Winner- RDotCapone |
I give this 2 RDot with better wordplay.... Slim lines were kinda played
it was close.. but it was the creativity of RDot that won it.. like how he spelled out his name with the 1st 9 letters.. clever il poll my vote if you poll vote fairly here please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67444 |
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Heres how I break it down
MULTIES - NONE WORDPLAY- NONE FLOW- R-Dot Capone by far --- "The way i'm beating this kid i'll be tracked by social services/ R-Dot's the lyrical legend. Slim is just the herb in this/"- Nice Line STYLE- Slim_Lanky --- No matter how bad his grammar is, he still had rhymes everywhere. VOTE CAPONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
kapone had better flow and punches........slim came to basic in this.......so props to both kapone doing his thang....and slim just alavate a lil man u got most of it u just need better vocab ....
aight can ya go check out this battle/...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9365#post669365 |
Favorite line:R-Dot
U should retract ur challenge. It's obvious u was never my match/ 'Cause when it comes 2 raps u can't see me like a cyclops wearing an eyepatch ****Laughing my azz off****Damn!!! |
uppin for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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capone got this one ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~aight niggas go vote on the d-mecca and rappad battle and the d-mecca xl4real battle
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