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pot1ent 07-31-03 11:36 AM

No Reach
 
Graspin nothin like you've no arms,
Masterin only not bein able to harm/
Blastin nothin but your own chances,
Degradin and now you've grown rancid/
The partin of hopes phaze your brain,
You haven't grazed but grazed your name/
Only hopes not the page have blazed,
Slopes more than a straight line placed/
Connectin your mind only to confusion,
Distressin cuz rhymes are dis-illusioned/
Blessin only hate upon surroundin peeps,
Caressin rap but get 1 base, neva complete/
Like doin a puzzle with half the pieces missing,
You can't hustle like your dis-able and tripping/
Aspirations is everything but there no delivery,
Lines drempt to be dope but the smoked in reality/

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>>>Trying to reach but whiten like bleech, cuz you can't connect, ghost that can't reserrect/ You're down yet ain't counted for, existence was't known cuz you were floored/
Walked all over!!!

.:Armd:. 07-31-03 09:37 PM

now i know y u got no replies..this is pretty wack..in all honesty..i was wonder n the whole time what u were go n for..whats the real point of this..flow was so so..metas were..................and u had no multis..im gonna assume ur farly new to this..if not..hmmm..seems like u tried hard to make this a real intelectual piece..just didnt come out right..wit a few changes..this could be hot..


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