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right befor i died i made the decision to decide to change my life
done so much wrong my religion even knew i wasnt right
ive lived in hell my whole life, lets make it up to heaven
workin my way up to cloud nine, then i was stuck on number seven
words is my head appeard, all the sins that i was comitten
i was all eared, untill they said they wouldnt be forgiven
i droped to my knees'n, pleein to be seatend in heaven cuz i got my reasons
i started reachen, deep breatin, heavy beatin, i was greiven
then the voices started leavin, and i started movin up i saw the gate
started walkin close then he said it was to late
everything under me disapeared, started turning black
my skin started gettin chared i wanted to turn back
i appeared in a red room, then a picture formed on the wall
it was him, damien, he said it was my call
a few more pictures made there apearance
again i was at my knees in deliriance
they showed my sinse, at exact precision of the time
showed my true coler, how i treated this world as mine
it showed the robbin the stealin, the broken heats the hurt feelins
the killin the shootin the kickin the stabin the weed the dealins
then he said i was to become his slave, like all other prisoners of hell
i offered to make a trade he slapped me said i will burn and dwell
i saw some familiar faces, the diranged disgraces
damien pulled out a whip and slaped me on the back
he laughed with every whack, i cry with every crack
then one last smack and i was back, on cloud seven
he said it wouled be forgiven, and 1 last thing he said he wasnt messin
every saturday u gota pull tricks with this he-she named kevin
down at the local seven-eleven


sorry bout the ending, well mather affact im sorry bout the whole thing lol, if u read it thanx tho i guess and tell me how to improve

u were right..cause im wonder n y i read this..hopefully this was just a bad drop..if not..u got some work to do..it was almost there..wit a better vocab..more multis..and a better flow..this woulda been ight..the concept was cool..u just didnt hit it hard enough..u had a lot of so so lines that coulda been real nice..and then the end n..WOW..it made the drop even worse..but like i said..some nice thoughts and ideas..u just need to elaborate on em..work on ya flow..and better multis..

lol at least ur honest, thanx for readin it tho, lately i havent been able to write nothin worth reading again i dont know why lol, rappers block, i think lol, well peace and respeck to ya

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