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Got drama speakin of all of what in Shakespears Minds/
Not any playwright of the Rennaisance can combine/
The fire spit in flows, to hot to burn through those/
Every rhyme is weaved in unison, like threads in clothes/
The life we live through which, all we know is spit/
Like a broken toilet, ya mind cannot take this shit/
Spittin steady crazy but the child doesn't know/
Lyrical prowess, for display, not to show/
Seemingly unreal in the way the vocabulary kicks in/
Shakespear would be mad for all the drama iv'e been/
Maybe it seems unreal, but the rhymes are real, you know/
because my rhymes become more complicated, like explainin miracle gro/
Look very closely and you see your rhymes come out ya ass/
Genetics in any cheetah explained much too fast/
Maybe you ain't prepared, the truth too much to dare/
Because in this life, you don't need a "bus" to know how you'd "fare"/

one word..................DAMN

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Seemingly unreal in the way the vocabulary kicks in/
Shakespear would be mad for all the drama iv'e been/
Maybe it seems unreal, but the rhymes are real, you know/
because my rhymes become more complicated, like explainin miracle gro/


you like shakespeare?? lol..nice drop kid..i like tha vocab....man..you could tell me a lot..lol..holla papi..God bless..1..

I read some shakespeaer 2 years ago in sixth grade and i still have the books. them shits is funny once you understand them

votes needed.......................................Me vs KRIMZEN..............

nice drop..some real lines in there...
"very rhyme is weaved in unison, like threads in clothes/
The life we live through which, all we know is spit/
Like a broken toilet, ya mind cannot take this shit/"
^^^nice lines...deep....


heres tha link..dun forget to POLL vote..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71110

sorry dawg, but this is open mic, link or no link, i ain't gettin involved in frontlines because battles there suck and crzy dick ride shit goin on there.