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hmm i liked this...even if its directed towards me...u wont answer me if it is or not.but i dont care....

You've displayed your emotions well..ur lines express the anger. And i know of some of your hardships....but I like this..even if it is directed towards me......ur vocab has always been good..so i do not need to comment on that

You Are A Completely Self Asorbed
Self Centered Individual M______
Its A Verse For A Song Dont Let The Moderator
Status Go To Your Head..You Didnt Like This
So Dont Front About It.......

~Linkin Park- Points At Authority~
Listen To the Chorus It Describes You At The Moment

Dont PM Me..Dont Email Me..
Do You Whatever That May Be
But Dont Involve Me In It

Peace

<<<am gonna be nice....will not say anymore mean things...will always keep her mouth shut...
thank you
-L. Trin


(oh yea...seriously did like the piece)

Well, I don't want in the argument or anything...lol...I just wanted to say I like this piece and i felt the emotion...

peAce

Find Somebody Elses Thread To Clog Up
Struggled Saying Motherfucker Didnt Ya
The Line Was For Your Name Which I Wouldnt
Put On Here No Matter How I Was Feeling...

As For Whining Your The Queen Of That
And Nothing Was About You In This Entire Verse
~Fact Of The Stupid Matter~
If It Was About You I Would Make A Trinity Fuck You
Song...No Shame In Me....Thats Not Gonna Happen
And I Have Nothing Against You But Just Do You
And Leave Me Alone..i Have Changed..I Dont Deal
With Anyones Bullshit...Your Supposed To Change
As You Get Older...Nothing Against But Leave Me Alone
Forreal Forreal Whatevers Right I Changed..
Your A Big Girl Be Mature As Well


Seriously....Peace

~Downing..Drowning~

~Dead~

Hard to dig into this one. I got parts of it as you once again having a go at those 'haters'. Showing, in your own way, your abilities..er...(?!?!)...

Seemd like a personal piece of venting. On more than one front..

I think it's a bit more 'akward' than some of your others. But as it seems a vent, it's understandable.

...resp....

Thank You V..Im Representing The Only Way That
I Feel Would Be Appropriate....Thank You For Reading
Thinking For A Moment Or So And Finding The Flow
Which Is Fast To The Commas...Thank You Man

Peace

Dwoning...Drowning..5..4..3..2..1..Dead