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PleDge 08-02-03 08:28 PM

Mission Impossible
 
Listenin to her stereo and driving along
in her car not a care in the world singing her favourite song
then her cell went off and she reached out to grab it
then dropped it at her feet and hadtto reach down to get it
took her eyes of the road ended up in a car crash
and when the ambulance came they realised the damage done to her was harsh
her legs were paralised, for the rest ofher days she in a chair
she couldnt depend on herself no more..got put on welfare
but this gurl had a problem even bigger than this
she was in love with a man to get together with him was her only wish
problem being he was prejudic against the disabled
one time she seen him look disgusted when she pulled up next to him
there was a certain air around tha gurl that made er beautiful
but he could not see past the wheels she had, this was her scruples
so she decided that the only thing to do was learn to walk again
she had already done it once so whats the harm in it
the first couple of steps took her weeks to accomplish
and then she learned how to walk with a walking stick and felt replenished
she she finally plucked up courage and tried taalking to him a second time
although he took one look at her stick and put on an evil smile
she was disheartened and she wanted nothing else but to die
and that night she lay in her room bursting to cry
but she held back.didnt let her walls hear her sobs
she had already been thru hell with friends familys and lack of jobs
tossed her stick out the window in a fit of rage
couldnt get up to do nothing...she was at paniking stage
what if there was a fire? what if someone was dying
and with these thoughts fresh in her head she started trying
stumbling here and there and finally gripping for balance
she took her first unhelped steps it was comleting her best challenge
the next few months she worked on her walking to perfection
she could even manage to sligthly jog all she wnted to do was inpress him
so that night she went to the dancefloor and showed that she could dance one more
when who should appear behind her but the man she had loved once before
but as she realised inside her that even though hed drived her
to complete her tas of waling again she needed him no longer
and if she were to go back in time and lose it all
once again would she go thru the torment to complete mission impossible

rule 08-02-03 08:38 PM

that was a good drop, i liekd the flow...the story line had a great sence a lot of meaning nice spit check my drop out...over seas children"

o0 Spirit 0o 08-03-03 01:58 AM

^^ tru tru but that mission impossible wasnt flowin with your whole topic for me , might just be me but yea


good spit upppppppppppin for this spit

o0 Spirit 0o 08-03-03 02:00 AM

lol nevermind just read your damn title it flowed without a hitch now lol sorry for that shit...............

PleDge 08-03-03 06:33 PM

lol its aight thanks for tha feedback.uppin

latin nick 08-04-03 12:03 AM

thats a sad story..not bad tho

DeadlySpitta 08-04-03 12:06 AM

aiyyo i like this alot. You should start doin these in audios. They're tight in text but even better in audio. Overall, I'll give this an 8/10. Nice shit pledge. Keep droppin.

murda_mistress 08-04-03 12:18 AM

NICE gurl nice sad though :(

PleDge 08-04-03 07:10 AM

thanks for everyones feedback.uppin on this one

Prolifik Prophet 08-04-03 07:14 AM

yes indeed...I was feelin' the topic...and the flow was nice...


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