Randy
 

A poem for a man who was there but unwilling to care




Whats a father?
A man who will do anything to make his son happy?
A man who will help his son when he needs it the most?
A man who teaches his son all about life?
A man that is there to talk to?
A man that is willing to listen as well as take advice?
A man to explain every little querry?
A man I don't know!

Tell me whut ya'll think

Short, simple with a real strength of emotion and thought to it.

It wasn't overly spectacular. Was what it was.

Fairly nice twist at the end, even though slightly predictable.

Fathers, eh?...

..resp..

I usually don't like short ones like this cause it's hard to feel what the writer is saying in just a few words. I liked this one. It was pretty good. You started out asking questions then at the end came with that line saying it's someone you don't know. Nice job..keep posting.

Thanx!

tight piece,short,simple and quick to get to tha point.~1~