Freestyle burnt..
 

burnt

ohh shit ive been burnt ,but these wounds i cant heal
fuck this u cant say sorry u dont even kno how i feel
how can i be real
u got me screaming your name
i betcha a mil that uve neva felt this pain
but shit at least i styll got my game
but this love i have is like a lion i cant tame
u say u done wit him, but ya aint?
but i look bak for sec come bak i was about tuh faint
i wanna sock um in the jaw but i caint (cant)

Chorus
Damn girl i lookin bak on this (on this)
i regret gettin into this (into this)
How did i get in this shit? (this shit)
Damn girl, i think it was a waste a time. (of time)
u made me loose my mind (my mind)
we should put this behind (behind)

hell i shoulda thought about thiz
the situation iz soo thick
im loosing control getting sick
nd tired a u
how the fuck can i be myself wen im soo into You
i cant stop what i started soo long ago
ur the first girl i thought about that wasnt a hoe
wasnt a slut
didnt wanna cut
but now ya gone
have i done sumfin rong
mayb mayb naww

Chorus
Damn girl i lookin bak on this (on this)
i regret gettin into this (into this)
How did i get in this shit? (this shit)
Damn girl, i think it was a waste a time. (of time)
u made me loose my mind (my mind)
we should put this behind (behind)

thids was pretty good the only thing i can criticise is you need to make your line lenghts better......................................and up your vocab keep writin peace

it had some emotion in it wich makes for good songs, but your flow and lack of vocab really made it dull...

peace...