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This song {CAR BOMBS} is going to be on the {WHITE BOY COMPULATION}

Its my beat n I’ve done the edits I’m gonna make exept for the 2nd part of the hook its all jacked but ima bout to fix that right now…..but the professionals peeps who is doing the mixing sound all that hi-tech sh%t gonna hit it up with PRO TOOLS n fix any flaws and add any effects or dbl layer the bass in certain parts or w/e I might actually have to re-record my vocals in their studios if they say so …because I did all this sh%t from my apartment but when they get done mastering it …it’ll sound 20 times better

Anyways just looking to see wut u peeps think so halla with sum feed back if ya would

This is just a sample ---short version

hook

Car bombs, nukes n grenades
It’s the sounds your gonna hear the explosions over the waves
Across the whole nation
so you betta be prepared for the outcome when it hits your station

from barn yards to bars
small time studios to livin large
supercharged when droppin the bars
wired up like explosives sittin under cars

1st verse

yo Reed n Rossi stepping in on this compilatation
causin devastation tnt explosions
the games been overflowin with corrosion
hit it with a dosage of the verbal potion
watch that sh%t evaperate like hand lotion
hokis pokis brokin noses chin checkin in every situation
two men stepping wreckin lyrically leathal weapons
releasing aggressions can u feel the tension as it thickens
peelin away at this rap game ain’t no easy pickins
so that’s why I’m stickin to the ground
like a sound hound turn that sh%t around and I hound sound
music is the only theropy for me
f*ck a degree when your determind in to succeed
speading my wings pursuing my dreams
yeah no sh%t things aren’t what they seem
I;ve picked and packed it up a dozen times
Now I drop dimes ona mic buzzin minds
f*ck what you like I;m getting mine
Takin my game to a whole new level
While the rest stay behind n whine
The hell with livin confined I gos to shine

hook

Car bombs, nukes n grenades
It’s the sounds your gonna hear the explosions over the waves
Across the whole nation
so you betta be prepared for the outcome when it hits your station

from barn yards to bars
small time studios to livin large
supercharged when droppin the bars
wired up like explosives sittin under cars

2nd verse is my boy
hook
we split the 3rd verse
then it fades out