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LiL LoCo~ 08-04-03 02:56 AM

Krazy Klique Diss - Street Diss Must Peep
 
aimed at this kid John and his crew

Chorus x2:
Sick off dis gangsta gangsta shit dat yall spit/
gangsta gangsta/yall dun none of it/
gangsta gangsta/to bad yall dun admit/
gangsta gangsta/you nuttin more den a wanksta...


when i grab da mic-my fans luvs me like a man luvs a dyke/
im more verbically insane then a Retard with a pencil-
and im tellin u young cats- i dun bite- its just mental/
so u wannabes i hope this rhyme is influental/
ill cap u fakes/i dun make mistakes/there ain't no second takes/
keep spittin fake see what happens-there ain't no acciden'ts its mishappens/
u fakes ima stab yo abs- wit a verbal vocab/
that will leave you wit a verbal scab-sendin u back to the rap lab/
i spit so quik-u think its a rap trick-u got lost and u need a map to stat intact/
but u whacked-hit u wit words that feel as if u got Smacked!/
it feels the same when u ballin and u get packed/

Chorus x2

im sick of these hatas-traitors-stab u in da back/
snitches-kids who can't get bitches-those kids usually left in stiches/
or in the morgue 6 feet deep-eterinity they will sleep/
kids who are fake-for gods sake-should drop the mic/
and dun spit-sit-and listen-beatin me is like the immpossible misson/
it can't be done-can't be won-only choice is to lose-
im like the machine that don't got the "off" fuze/
dun need to hit u phsycially to abuse/
just gotta spit at u mentally for u 2 bruise/
when the Kings roll threw-we stand true/
and wipe out "The Pussy Crew"-John im talkin to you/
latin king love-stands above-you fags-odun need a tek-
to impload ur neck-hit u words and ull be dyin in a sec/
keep fuckin wit me and when i see u ima have my strap/
ima take ur crew off the Chi-Town "map"/

Chorus x1

FUCK John- Fuck Craig- Fuck Jamal-Fuck Roland-
John AND THE KRAZY CLIQUE CAN SUCK MY MOTHA FUCKIN DICK
MAN FUCK THE WHOLE FUCKIN C.T.B CREW FUCK YALL NIGGAS
WAIT TILL I COME THREW U NOT GON EVEN SEE IT COMIN MOTHA FUCKAS

*sudden pause*
*shots fire+ laughter*
SUP NOW MOTHA FUCKAS

AMOR DE REY
KING LOVE

Sweet Sauce 08-05-03 03:46 PM

lol this was pretty straight the chours was catchty, a few thing in the first lines was straight and a lot more at the end the end was rhymin good. keep spittin

Sweet Sauce 08-05-03 03:48 PM

These are my fav lines:
ill cap u fakes/i dun make mistakes/there ain't no second takes/
keep spittin fake see what happens-there ain't no acciden'ts its mishappens/
u fakes ima stab yo abs- wit a verbal vocab/
that will leave you wit a verbal scab-sendin u back to the rap lab/


i spit so quik-u think its a rap trick-u got lost and u need a map to stat intact/
but u whacked-hit u wit words that feel as if u got Smacked!/
it feels the same when u ballin and u get packed/


beatin me is like the immpossible misson/
it can't be done-can't be won-only choice is to lose-
im like the machine that don't got the "off" fuze/
dun need to hit u phsycially to abuse/
just gotta spit at u mentally for u 2 bruise/

DiverseSyndicate 08-05-03 03:56 PM

a lil slow but good chorus and good rhyme scheme, keep droppin,~1~

Xcentric 08-05-03 04:12 PM

Decent flow and decent rhyme scheme keep elevatin nigga

DeadlySpitta 08-06-03 12:13 PM

this was sum tight shit. Keep droppin. I hope to see more shit like this from u. I wonder how them niggaz feel to be dissed right now lol.

Sweet Sauce 08-07-03 01:31 AM

it ain't like they gon' come on here and fuckin look at this diss he prob just spit it out of anger..

prophiit 08-07-03 01:55 AM

i liked it so much i read it twice the flow was nice i wasn't really feeling the chorus though that whole wanksta shit is getting kinda played out but yo i felt the emotion in this so it was definently one of those drops a mufucka can connect to. keep killing them. 1

Sweet Sauce 08-07-03 02:10 AM

yea i wrote this.. they banned my name LiL LoCo~ so i made this .. i didn't want everyone knownin but i droped this flow.

Sweet Sauce 08-07-03 07:32 PM

uppin

Destruction 08-07-03 08:18 PM

Nice drop it...I kinda liked it the way u structred it and the wording was also good can u take a look at these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71510
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71509

Sweet Sauce 08-08-03 12:13 AM

ight ill check em out...

UPPIN


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