uhm, feedback plz...
 

Yeah...i think the titLe is quickie...shit is sooo low quality...and fLow is kinda off(loL even missing some ad libs)....just some shit i threw together and wanted feed on...so yeah drop your feed...loL dont go easy naw'mean...:o

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/salthekingmusic.htm

wow....where can i begin....your deliver is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay off, and ur flow is horrible dawg.....u have no flow what so ever.....your lyrics could definitely improve and your doubles need help......u need crazy elevation, but keep doin your thing....it takes time to improve, just be patient and find yourself in beat....OnE




I'm Ghost...

word, thanks! fa sho! upping!

i dont think you are allowed to critique any more tracks i post on this site....thats the new rule...thanks for the click though...

yeah...flow was way off....um....wow...where can i begin.....i dont really know...so i wont

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...lol aight since when are movie critics actors...yeah fa sho man, if i wasnt new to this so much, my hopes of elevating wouLd be crushed....i appreciate the feed...sorry for upping this again..but i didnt wanna freepost...from now on i'll just edit this...

too low on the mic not much presense at all. pretty much all of your problems are the same as the ones i have. it's some some alright lyrics but needs alot of work

well theres def room for improvement n shit but for being in ya early stages of ya steez u def have potential.. stay focused,dedicated n just keep at it n u'll elevate in no time yo.. this overall wasent WACK.. it wasent ground breakin either but its all an experience dawg.. regardless, keep droppin.1

...thanks for the feed upping..