Thought Process (introspection and retrospection of issues i wanted to address...peep
REPLIED TOO:
ksmylez- ammunition Baron Mynd- Weapon Omega. . Eviley- B.R.E Prezents: Losing your other half... Divine forces muster plans for some grand design/ Life support distorts, demand overstands the supply/ No one stands at the side of someone on the front lines... Holdin fort/ Crossbones brand the mind when its crunchtime... Ball rollin in the court// So im handlin shots addressed from the famished... Of any size or sort/ If you tanglin on the block wit tha fresh and candid... Then you truthfully prize the sport// And im tryin to cope wit bullshit/ and stomach those who pull it// If its injected and served by substance abusers/ Gettin rejected and purged like the heimlich manuever// Brotha my depression resides in the manic/ Stressin on issues seemingly seismic to manage// The truth moves optimism to a drout/ Dreams diffuse to pessimism cloggin the routes// Shit Ima realist scriptin lyrics at eighteen/ Christened a pretense when I didnt enlist inta tha mainstream// And Moms wasnt sad... When she saw a bad seed in me/ Moms was mad... When she saw my dad's genes in me// Its funny most folks... i meet are ignorant to an extent/ Only privy to the hoax of a sambo... And dont give two shits about African-Americans// Vigorously pumpin diesel for a boomin culture/ But history doesnt signal the inhuman torture// Now that you see the opulence of the tools/ Ya ready ta build houses for 40 acres and the mule// |
ya'll know the drill...constructive criticsm is tje name of the game i'll holla back with the flames to ya mainframe at anotha date...latez
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I liked this piece fo' real...you had some nice multies up in there son... and I think that the topic was creative... nice drop god...but 1 thing...you ain't gotta put all the other open mics that you repied too...I think the people can figure it out for themselvez...
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big ups to this ya'll
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