Some of my battle text. plz tell me what ya think
 

--Yeh this is just some of my battle text, with "tha_saint" tell me what ya think of my rymhes. cheers aight ;)--


with all the colour of my rymhes, im gunna start to paint,
with blood reds, and thugs head turned to dis this fucking saint,
he thinks he's taking over and has a little pic to prove it,
well move it, g, your groove is losing all its prudence,
i dont have time, to waste my mind in this thugs dreams of fame,
and it is fine, if he resigns and says his words are lame,
cause i know that i could blow him of this world we live in,
and given the chance to beat "tha saint" id take the ribbon.

thats good vocab from a newb n shit

good luck with your shit

no beef just reality

Decent Verse Nothin Special Keep Doin Ya Thang G

cheers fella's appreciate da input, yo xcentrix what could i do to make it special dawg?

Kid Try 2 Work On Ur Multies...U Have Potential,Work On Ur Vocab A Lil More..Keep Elevatin G Eventualy U'll Get Betta Hope It Helped..Peace Out

peace xcentric, yeh ill do that man cheers!!

there was potential you just need to exploit it better good verse over all i liked it peep my new ish

thx Word, what do you mean exploit it better? id like to know,
work out man, cheers.
peace.

exploit means if it is your strong side use it and twist tyo every angle of advantage you can

aight thx G