. Open Mic.
 

My first Open Mic in a month at least
Please note, the reference to MastaMindz doesnt mean im in the crew

It's been brought to my Attention, they say I Fell Off
My Shellz Soft? Steady on my dick.. get the Hell Off
My first Open Mic in Weeks, I apologize for the Wait
My Fate unknown or simply too Great to Contemplate
Ya Brain waves are too Weak to Speak on MastaMinds
We Pass The Time Kickin' Rhymes not Cockin' Nines
You'll Often Find defeat when tryin' to Meet the God
No Mods will warn ya before I openly Heat ya Squad
Hopefully you Keep my Card when ya finally Elevate
Tell em Wait! Not to my level, 10 below me, Celebrate!
We've Established, with bars golden, I'm very Wealthy
2nd Helping, Eat Amazingness for lunch, Keeps me Healthy
Melt me? In my personal Prison I'm holdin' Solid Bars
U Call It Scars, I simply crashed to earth like Fallin' Stars
Pound 4 Pound, Fuck that, Ounce 4 Ounce, I'm Iller
Not a Killer but it's easy to Merk when facing Filler
With mad writers block, Faced Evolve, I recall a Loss
RB Will be left with less survivors than the Holocaust

.I'm Back Nuccaz.

Damn...That Was Very Nice...Vocab Was Ill...Flow Was On Point, Sick...Multi's Were Nice...Damn The Whole Verse Was Sick...Keep Up The Good Shit Man...

this verse was sick....
wasn't you in A.I? oh well but anyways this shit was sick, flow was easy to catch on, had good vocab, had some good meta's and everything, i liked this shit. return the favor and peep my piece "rage of a Mortal", lookin for some good feedback.
peace.

Yeah, I was in AI, nothing really going on there. I didnt really wanna leave but I wanted a crew that did shit nahmean?

yo that was some hot stuff man keep that shit up

damn meta, that was dope.
your flow was insanely nice, and the multies were really sick.
The content was cool, because it was just a flow piece, but topical is always better.
Nice closing line.
I really don't think I need to give you more crit because you know what you're doin.

Maybe me you and tik should do that collab even though h2f shut down, eh?
get at me on AIM: pitchblackprism
Peace

word, im down with that, get @ Tik

this drop was nice indeed...I alwayz been a sucka for a good multi...and you had plenty in this piece...you also had a coupla nice meta's and punchez...I would quote them but I'm too lazy...lol...I also liked ya flow...it was easy to catch on...now can you reply to my last keystyle?????? it's called 5:12...the title'z pretty self-explanatory...lol

word, any other replies?

Can i get some more feedback?