insomniac's opinion on life...
 

yes indeed...4:30 in da morning keystyle...

I live life to the fullest and I hate every single hour-I-spend//
cowardz-pretend to be ya friend only to let you down-in-the-end//
all the good I've done in my life has been overpowered-by-sin//
now-I-begin to realize that when I get jumped the first one'z to stomp me out-are-my-friendz...

I'm not afraid of death...cause to me there'z nothing as scary-as-life//
my mind'z been buried with strife and I can't trust noone so I alwayz carry a knife//

for all my transgressions only my depression's-been-blessed//
I'll be holdin' a weapon-in-death my entire life is just a cycle of regression-and-stress...

I live in the darkness that's why I alwayz sleep-in-the-day//
evil creeps-where-I-lay I got no love "your crazy" is all that people-will-say//

I hope someone will read this and feel touched-through-the-comp//
I wanna get married and have kidz but the only girl that's ever loved me'z my mom//

I've been through drama...I've been through trialz of denial of course//
I've also been in trialz-in-court cause my father didn't wanna pay my child support//

all the people that hate me will appreciate-when-I'm-dead//
sittin' alone in my bed only thoughts of suicide do I contemplate-in-my-head...

the flow n the lyricism in this peice was pretty impressive yo.nicely worded n the internal/multi syl rhymin was on point also.. seems like it would flow dope 2 a beat vocally.. nice lil post overall kid.

^^^thank for da feedback man...I see that you stayed in Flatbush... I lived there for a minute too...but then I moved to Utica...

yea i liked this piece...multi's were good..which is always my favorite lol..worded nicely..vocab was pretty good....jus good verse overall

Favorite lines
live life to the fullest and I hate every single hour-I-spend//
cowardz-pretend to be ya friend only to let you down-in-the-end//
all the good I've done in my life has been overpowered-by-sin//
now-I-begin to realize that when I get jumped the first one'z to stomp me out-are-my-friendz...
I'm not afraid of death...cause to me there'z nothing as scary-as-life//
my mind'z been buried with strife and I can't trust noone so I alwayz carry a knife//


dope ...8/10 :) keep it up boo

^^^thanks friend...lol...still uppin'

good rhyme, multis,piece was hot all in all,keep droppin.~!~

^^^I will...trust me...I do one of these late night keystylez just about every night...