Kal vs. Slim Lanky
 

Regular rules apply....
10 lines min
20 lines max
no dick ridin
no cru
no hate
spit at same time
lets see what you got
due asap

Ok it is time for me to perform again, so get your notepad and ball point pen//

My style be versatile why yours be a copy off 8 mile, so give me a little while before your dead like Daryl Kile//

You steal shit like your name was Wanona Rider mine be one of a kind like McGyver //

You’ll be screamin for your life while I steal the mic and use it as a knife//

Stabbin you with Disses and dirty hits, attacking you like a charging safety blitz//

Kal, my name could be Mr. T, becuase i pitty you foo, your record is about to go 0 and 2//

You cant touch me, I will chew you up and spit you out, You then will be quiet more than a Deteriot Tigers Dugout//

Kal quit while your ahead, before one day you really end up dead//

This kid be kneein on the floor, Bowin his head and screamin "I don’t want anymore"//

That that i have showed you what is game is about, pick up your dignity and walk your way out//

-Slim Lanky-

this is the first line of a rhyme to make you loose heart,
the first part of the calm before the storm starts,
you callin yourself ‘slim’, that’s grim crim & unoriginal,
get ready for a ‘slim fast shake’ note the subliminal,
you said make it fast, I will, you wouldn’t last, I had you beat before my first line was cast,
I’m only a newbie see, but you still couldn’t whoop me,
you should’ve picked on something easier like your nose lanky,
I’m gonna let you submit now cos I think I hear you cryin,
see you later slim, at least you tryin.

-kal-

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well i dont know the rules on this one but i just realize this newb cant count i said 10 lines min and the cat be puttin out 9? what is that shit? you better come up with a good closer....

my vote goes to slim lanky better punchs and flow word play was equal vote slim lanky and go vote on the d-mecca vs mcgambit battle and d-mecca vs eyesmindassassin

sorry for the crime, hears my last line, i'll call it number 10, you dead now, amen.............................................. .........................

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why's that dude uppin for votes when it ain't his battle?????????
thanks anyway man............................................... .......................

kal you need to elevate man come up with some better wordplay and punches.

Slim yours was decent you still gotta elevate tho but you outdid this Busta

Vote: Slim Lanky

yo slim got this better wordplay flow and punches
Vote=slim
yo can you drop an honest vote thanx
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! help me out give an honest vote!!!!

lol, some newbie up'd u vote for you......... so newbies are good for something. I think that kal got this one because he had a better vocabulary and was a lil more original

Vote:Kal

slim i think got it his was more better

he had better punches,flow,word play

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%oh yeah will u go check this battle out and drop a honest vote its j.k.o verse keesy kee