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Rappad v.s Mortality
Aight lets go
My Rules You spit first 10-14 lines no hate votes no d/r votes Lets get this goin |
ok man checkin in gl to both of us im spittin and going to sleep lol
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aight hurry up yo................................................ .............................
Oh yea i'm not gonna feed i forgot to put the no feeding rule in. Good Luck Kid..................... |
shit sorry my comp just fuckin crashed w/e i remember most of my verse
I'm 'kickin' vicious shit so speak and you'll be shittin Timbs for weeks// Ya rhymes could use some definition so here's a list of synonyms for "weak"// Timid, slim, and beat; pathetic, ass, scrawny, tired, and hopeless// Ya mic's wires are frozen cuz ya lyrics is 'short on fire' like roaches// Be careful cuz death approaches, ya left lying in a herse// Leaving this earth 'toe-tagged' like playin hide n seek with a smurf// Now tha beast has emerged, teachin this herb to plot tha blue print// You must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent// Here's my 2 cents, you must be willing to die with ur mind cluttered// Work on text design fucker then develop some rhyme structure// I leave spines ruptured, show you how i attack tracks and score fast// Call me a weatherman when i put ur norm ass in four casts// I spin tricks with scorn and anger, while Mortality leaves them suspense-less// Mortality="I see whack people!!"i guess i got that sixth sense...// peace |
Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"//
Late at night all you do is "Blare" People think you crazy but all they can do is "Look and Stare"// I'm about to make you soar as a "Blister" See i done fucked ya mom now i'm at ya "Sister"// Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"// Your punches are little mind as well call them "Humane" i have you in terror of death you runnin like "Saddam Husain"// You wish you had skill you call yourself "Hypochondriac" you read my first 2 lines and you relize you wish you had a 2nd chance to "React"// See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"// You on my computer is juss a fucked up "Megabyte" After ya done readin my verse you'll notice my shit is "Hella-tite"// Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"// Done! |
That's only 9 lines but oh well
it's good enough lets get some votes................................. |
yo maortalit go into our batle and drop ya verse........hurry................................ ......................
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wow. mortality is really good. must not be a REAL newb. jus new to RB. lol... i liked these lines:
Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"// Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"// See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"// Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"// lol they made me laugh and overall i think u had the better verse. ur really good. elevate an come try out for the Executives ! :D |
ok nice battle man
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hmm,,,,,,on the real....rappad came nice......betta punches..he had creativity in his disses and wordplay....nice flow...
Mortality was iight but his punches did'nt hit that hard...he had some nice oneliners..disses were a lil mediocre did'nt land with no heat...creativity was'nt there.....I can see him progression as a top newbie but just not with this rhyme here.... vote rappad...................................return Fav! |
my bad........tha poll vote is in!!!......................................holla.. .................................................. ...........
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ya mortality had a crazy verse but rappad was a bit better with the punches...everythin else was tie.......only an honest vote....no beef......
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^^^^^FUCK THAT, I SAY MORTALITY GOT THIS SHIT.
NO HATE THOUGH RAPPAD BUT MORTALITY GOT THIS SHIT DAMN................NICE SHIT VOTE-MORTALITY |
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