That Meaningful Ring
 

Umm i been stuck in drama and had to get down, it may seem confused cause i put it raw but i hope u can get some insight, the title aids to give away my grief...

rubix cubin boring bars my style attract the sky and lure in stars~
heart and soul the world's collide to survive i finish my encore on mars~
im never misuderstood my scriptures plain my blood and tears stain my under eyes~
my soul closed and sold to Lucifer for the juice of her thunder thighs~
wasted existence aggravated losses induced by infectious t&a~
but the essence in living on corners is to rock well and agree wit nay's~
my train of thought skipped a track my mental journey lost in my mental cage~
but the bird in my head doesnt sing of joy and peace i'll destroy the streets in a dented rage~
let lockjaw seep in and let my loss of flow flood my wildest dyslexic driven night hauntings~
picturin real poets emerging messiahs pure as diamonds without ice flossing~
but the block's gripping fears has closed minders tipping queers~
i dont agree but in ignorance i'll lose mind and flip a peer~
back on the correct route for thought losin my mind herded by evil intent~
a night alone in my bed without shorty will result in a cerebral dent~
i cant find my thought process with closed eyes im willingly lost see~
my whole tale is of a ring in the gutter only Lauren can comfort but shes Killing Me Softly~
1luv.

upward you go, elevation is key, feedback??? 1luv.

Nice work.Seems like she meant alot to you.But trust me u will get over her.Keep Droppin.Im out~1~

Decent Drop That Flowed Exceptionally Well
And Had A Slight Abstract Factor From The
Get Go...It Caught My Attention And You
Kept A Decent Rhyme Scheme At Parts That I
Thought It Would Branch Off You Kept It On Point..

What Was I Thinking...This Was Nicely Done Homie
Im Still Thinking On Topics...The Tournaments About
To Start Soon And Ive Just Been Writing A Lot To
Sharpen Myself Up...Good Luck To You If You Enter
Forreal Forreal..Peace

thanks to both and yeh BB she did mean a lot, 1luv.

The obscurely contstructed lines provided enticingly 'familiar' abstract imagery giving the emotions/motions of the 'situation' a depth of which i dug (especially in a personal way).

Most definetly dug all the way through. Even if it was a piece quite a bit within yourself/itself (more so the former). Cos hey, i do it too...

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