love
 

It comes to us in many fashions
Personifying endless passions
Ignoring gender, creed and race
Just look around, it's EVERY PLACE!
You'll find it in a baby's giggle
And also in a puppy's wiggle
In April's rain when flowers grow
In winter nights in quiet snow

~LOVE~

It's heard in songs throughout the land
And felt when someone takes your hand
Reflected in your dear ones' eyes
When gifts are given for surprise

It does not judge, condemn or scare
But cradles gently, showing care
So hear it! see it! touch it! feel!
Avail your senses, it's VERY REAL

It's here within the big and small
The fat, the thin, the short, the tall
It's what makes life worth living for
Never enough! there's ALWAYS more!

The human being can't do without
And this i KNOW without a doubt
So please say thanks to God above
For giving us this thing called "LOVE"

umm it was decent but it sounded really Dr. Suess umm i dont know whut much else to say except it sounded cliche and cheesy elevation is key, also read the friggin rules for the forum your only allowed 2 poems on the first page, you just fuck the rules and post 3 at one time with a 4th sitting near the bottom, "be smart dont be a retard" only tryna help, 1luv.

Read the reasons of closure on your other piece.

CLOSED for now.

Re-opened. Will comment on it later.

dat shit was funny infamous but on da real dat poem was tight
(even whatn infamous said lol)still ya poem even aplys to dick heads like dat "IT comes to us in many fashions personifying endless passions,ignoring gender creed an race,just look around its every place" love in infamous's twisted fashion an passion was from anger in a sense is still a form of love an even at da end of his post he showed u another "fashion" of love he ended it with 1luv like i said tight poem an what ever response u get from anybody it will still be classified as love

tight piece,it was emotional and strung together well keep droppin,peace girl