![]() |
More Freestyles from GridLock
money pourin' out every "single-pocket"...but by tha time i return home from tha casino half of it, "i've-lost-it"//
toxins a casino is a "similiar-bliss"...when playin' slots always off by one N "it-gets-u-pissed"// dismissed as i'm guided "straight-to-tha-exit"...in large amounts of debt as i try to get tha "mortage-extended"// bended "head-over-heels"...as i try to sweet talk my way out of getting "fucked-by-these-deals"// Meals-On-Wheels for tha time being will have "to-suffice"...cuz my gambling addiction got me in trouble, now it has "fucked-up-my-life"// strife thru numerous "persistant-complications"...life aint fair N mine could b considered a "perfect-demenstration"// presentation of what N what "not-to-do"...first thing on my mind is to "protect-my-crew"////// |
you don;t need to put " " ova every thing that rhymes...try to only use those around huge punches that heads might miss ONLY...it's really annoying to read...
|
Quote:
That means you show fear that 'your readers couldnt find your rhymin parts,...it really annoyin to read, like this....if you remove it peepz will read and feed-back. |
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:26 PM. |