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GridLockDaFelon 08-07-03 01:55 PM

More Freestyles from GridLock
 
money pourin' out every "single-pocket"...but by tha time i return home from tha casino half of it, "i've-lost-it"//
toxins a casino is a "similiar-bliss"...when playin' slots always off by one N "it-gets-u-pissed"//
dismissed as i'm guided "straight-to-tha-exit"...in large amounts of debt as i try to get tha "mortage-extended"//
bended "head-over-heels"...as i try to sweet talk my way out of getting "fucked-by-these-deals"//
Meals-On-Wheels for tha time being will have "to-suffice"...cuz my gambling addiction got me in trouble, now it has "fucked-up-my-life"//
strife thru numerous "persistant-complications"...life aint fair N mine could b considered a "perfect-demenstration"//
presentation of what N what "not-to-do"...first thing on my mind is to "protect-my-crew"//////

*bLaNkz* 08-07-03 02:25 PM

you don;t need to put " " ova every thing that rhymes...try to only use those around huge punches that heads might miss ONLY...it's really annoying to read...

Edicius 08-07-03 02:28 PM

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Originally posted by *bLaNkz*
you don;t need to put " " ova every thing that rhymes...try to only use those around huge punches that heads might miss ONLY...it's really annoying to read...


That means you show fear that 'your readers couldnt find your rhymin parts,...it really annoyin to read, like this....if you remove it peepz will read and feed-back.


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