VerbalLy NastY PEEP AND GIVE FEEDBACK
 

(Intro)
"Start speaken and get ya lips shut, Fill ya full of metal like a tip cup/"
"Fake rappers better leave in 10 days, cuz I see through u like X-Rays/"
"We jus spit six clips in ya direction from six different directions/
Only thing left is, ur bitch tits for inspection/"
"Fuckin with me? You gon die worse/ than the kids that got shot by them Columbine nerds/"

Now then....there seems to be some ppl talkin shit...and it's time to address all these faggots...
I don't give a shit what ur thinkin, u bitches don't phase me/
I'm like a psychic, cuz ur thoughts cease to amaze me/
Put u in th oven and heat u at 80, take u out and pull th heat out: the 380/
Bitch crews like B.R.E screamin "DON'T HURT ME" and "PLEASE SAVE ME"/
But ur team's shook, u get cooked like turkeys and gravy/
Get it straight, B.R.E has no leaders so how can we follow?/
U some dumb shits, like my bullets: ur heads is hollow/
Ya crew Like watchin lesbians go at it, ur misconceptions is "makin me nut(s)"///
Ya'll wanna act big jus cuz a few of u won a some battles?/
I ain't average, talent like mine is rare, like goin to NY and seein mules and cattle/
When I step up i'ma have u fucked up not bein able to decide who will battle/
It's plain to see, ya crew will get splattered..../

I ain't even tryin....u faggots ain't even worth 14 bars....but...I've saved th best for last...

All that bullshit ya'll was spittin, u need to drop it/
Cuz SYN the lyrical JESUS and u ain't Muhammed, there's only 1 prophet/
B.R.E Poetic? U ain't, and I barely try u and be like "That's hot shit!"
Ya'll cats is fuckin WACK why u think IM left untouchable?/
I'ma anal rape all u bitches in battle and show u ain't UNFUCKABLE/
You fags is like explosives: u only comp-bust-able (netcees)
So that's why I'm set to blow up and leave u scarred in th aftermath/
When I beat u, like ur cock when u see each other, ur life gon be hard after that/
Now on to "CRASH", I'm about to bring th "Smack Down"/
So "Bring it On" so I can whoop ur ass to th ground/
I'm sniffin out and attack ur faggot asses like bassett hounds/
I been gone but now I'm back to put u "no heart" rappers "back in th ground"/
You bitches is dead to me, I'm gon drain out what's left like XTC/
Fuck it, you both wack, like Ludacris you ROLL OUT, but I make ya head ROLL BACK/
And that's just th beginning of things/
YOU MUSTA BEEN "PUFFIN THE MAGIC DRAGON" THINKIN U GON WIN/
(Talkin shit about SYN was th last straw...now I'm set to put u in th ground)
OH YEA AND BTW THIS WAS NOTHING...purely effortless, took me maybe 15 mins


(Outro)
"This whole verse is just a blatant hit and run/
And like my dick in ya mouth - this is "just a taste of things to "cum"//

yo nice shit dawg,liked the vocab abd wordplay,multies,overall good ish.

Peace

UPPN
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i'm not big on diss songs but okay lets see, vocab was off the hook it flowed okay but had some rough patches you had an all around good song but again it coulda been better. i'd give it maybe a 7.5/10. no hate just my opinion.1