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GridLockDaFelon 08-07-03 05:01 PM

Peep this Yo.......N give Me Feedback
 
Rhythm installed permanently into my brain-nerves...figure out tha complexity of this emcee as there's a variety-of-words//

Merge together my vocab flows wit every prenounciation-of-a-letter...no matter what tha debate is about i'm evidently tha one that-is-better//

Forever i contain power to crush ppl like an-hour-glass...tha hardest thing ur able to spit is tha seeds stuck in ya teeth from tha-flower-patch//

Attach my lyrics to a post-it-note...they're still viscious fear it as they head straight for-tha-throat//

Spoke many unknown n peculiar definitve-languages...soul taken over to complicate u wit pain, sorrow, N severe-anguishes//

As u can see my freestyles have a whole range-of-diversity...even tho i've been heckled N thrown thru-adversity//

Meticulately i tediously converge to-create...a weapon of power capable of devestation as its powered-by-hate//

Discriminate tha conclusion or tha-verdict...if u kno me well enuff then u'll see y im tha one-who-deserves-it//

Wortless ur nothing but scrap on tha-ground...metal easily bent witout force until tha othas-r-found//

An'][']-[opoLog„ 08-07-03 10:11 PM

wack

Tha Vision 08-07-03 10:47 PM

It was an ok drop. Some similies in it but it seemed like it lacked any real topic. I'm guessing this is just a freewrite? And why are some of tha words joined with hyphens? Some of them aren't multies or anything....6/10

Drop me some feedback on my shit "Get Away"


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