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Sureal vs. Whitelightning
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30 Lines Max No Crew/dr/hatin I Will Spit First |
I Am In .... nI mA I
Good Luck ... kcuL dooG You'll Need It...tI deeN ll'uoY -Sureal ... laeruS- |
Whitelightning ...You Surprised Me With How Much You Know..
...That Would Be Zero...Unlike His Cock That Number Just Rose.. This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations.. Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications.. Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines.. Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n.. He Challenges Me Cuz He Got Kicked Out Of The League For Whackness.. Kid You Cant Attack This, Like Unemployed Lawyers You Need Practice.. Oh Come On Man, I Rip Kids Like This Worse Then Michael Jackson.. Like Gay Couples Running Away, I'm Gonna Send You Home Packin'.. And No, In The Line Above^ I'm Not Talkin About Packing a Lunch.. Cuz Like Quzzy Modo Takin A Lie Detector, This Is More Thena Hunch.. Why Are You Here?, This Rapbattles.Com Where We Define Illness.. Stand In A River To Piss And Your Flow Would Still Miss.. Kid You Better Be SuperStitious If You Wana Chance At A Punch.. Cuz Against Me In This Battle Lightning Wont Even Strike Once.. 16... Now Lets See Your 30 Line Book... |
*I showed you this site..and look what you have done..but it's time to play dirty...Here is my book*
I am sick of all your meaningless shit this is from the heart not prewrit brace yourself for the personal effects there'll be more punches than you had sex guess I only need one your the caucasian that's dried up and done committ suicide here is the fuckin gun do you even know what pussy is you get off at the sight of your own giz what about Mallory? she never fucking liked you it was a grade 7 relation in grade 11, who knew? every fuckin person who saw ya "together" went to a dance and she acted like you didn't get her, she wanted something better tellin us about how she was the one you were gunna hit you kissed her once! wow you pounced on that pussy! all the people readin this prose, see another relationship exposed ya ain't the mack daddy at all, just another bitch with dick so small always hangin with amie at the mall, she got no tits at all look you got something in common! less curves than a quarter mile track, got the squirrel sized sack it's the perfect couple, ugly and stupidity it was just something made to be Just give it up Bryan, you obviously got an interest in dyin you keep runnin ur cannon about Em "If we had a text...I could beat em" blah blah blah blahoobersit your so fucking full of shit your place is this board, no farther, no more, your goin nowhere |
Sureal took this easily. Lawyer line was nice, calculus was cool, closer was your best line. I liked it. I'll be back later to break this down. . it's 1:30 am and I'm too tired to really go line for line.
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Sureal had this wrapped up like small condoms on 12" dicks right from the start. He had much better flow, more complexity, better punches and wordplay. in short better verse. White came really newbyish, he had simple punches and nothin that stood out at all.
Vote=Sureal |
Sureal
Whitelightning ...You Surprised Me With How Much You Know.. ...That Would Be Zero...Unlike His Cock That Number Just Rose.. ^wack This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations.. Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications.. ^eh..that was ok Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines.. Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n.. ^filler. He Challenges Me Cuz He Got Kicked Out Of The League For Whackness.. Kid You Cant Attack This, Like Unemployed Lawyers You Need Practice.. ^decent personal. had potential to be dope but you didnt follow all the way through. good nonetheless Oh Come On Man, I Rip Kids Like This Worse Then Michael Jackson.. Like Gay Couples Running Away, I'm Gonna Send You Home Packin'.. ^played And No, In The Line Above^ I'm Not Talkin About Packing a Lunch.. Cuz Like Quzzy Modo Takin A Lie Detector, This Is More Thena Hunch.. ^lol...good. Why Are You Here?, This Rapbattles.Com Where We Define Illness.. Stand In A River To Piss And Your Flow Would Still Miss.. ^ set up was good but the 2nd line was blah. Kid You Better Be SuperStitious If You Wana Chance At A Punch.. Cuz Against Me In This Battle Lightning Wont Even Strike Once.. ^lol...dope closer. whitelightning...hole shit you were all over the place here... I am sick of all your meaningless shit this is from the heart not prewrit brace yourself for the personal effects there'll be more punches than you had sex guess I only need one your the caucasian that's dried up and done committ suicide here is the fuckin gun do you even know what pussy is you get off at the sight of your own giz ^this shit was all filler. qualitly or quantity my friend. what about Mallory? she never fucking liked you it was a grade 7 relation in grade 11, who knew? every fuckin person who saw ya "together" went to a dance and she acted like you didn't get her, she wanted something better ^eh...this hard he potential to be killer. you couldve won this battle right here...but you were way to inconsistant and didnt come close to pulling it off. you kissed her once! wow you pounced on that pussy! all the people readin this prose, see another relationship exposed ya ain't the mack daddy at all, just another bitch with dick so small always hangin with amie at the mall, she got no tits at all look you got something in common! ^what....the...fuck? less curves than a quarter mile track, got the squirrel sized sack it's the perfect couple, ugly and stupidity it was just something made to be Just give it up Bryan, you obviously got an interest in dyin you keep runnin ur cannon about Em "If we had a text...I could beat em" blah blah blah blahoobersit your so fucking full of shit your place is this board, no farther, no more, your goin nowhere ^again potential but you made it wack. Lightning obviously couldve killed it here but his verse was to be honest....wack. your bars were all over the place and 1/4 of the time you didnt even rhyme. Sureals verse wasnt that good either but he took this with his 2 good punces... vote-Sureal |
Whitelightning ...You Surprised Me With How Much You Know..
...That Would Be Zero...Unlike His Cock That Number Just Rose.. OK..seen better from u before.. This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations.. Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications.. ^eh..that was ok Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines.. Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n.. ^filler. He Challenges Me Cuz He Got Kicked Out Of The League For Whackness.. Kid You Cant Attack This, Like Unemployed Lawyers You Need Practice.. ^decent personal. had potential to be dope but you didnt follow all the way through. good nonetheless Oh Come On Man, I Rip Kids Like This Worse Then Michael Jackson.. Like Gay Couples Running Away, I'm Gonna Send You Home Packin'.. ^played And No, In The Line Above^ I'm Not Talkin About Packing a Lunch.. Cuz Like Quzzy Modo Takin A Lie Detector, This Is More Thena Hunch.. ^lol...good. Why Are You Here?, This Rapbattles.Com Where We Define Illness.. Stand In A River To Piss And Your Flow Would Still Miss.. ^ set up was good but the 2nd line was blah. Kid You Better Be SuperStitious If You Wana Chance At A Punch.. Cuz Against Me In This Battle Lightning Wont Even Strike Once.. ^lol...dope closer. whitelightning...hole shit you were all over the place here... I am sick of all your meaningless shit this is from the heart not prewrit brace yourself for the personal effects there'll be more punches than you had sex guess I only need one your the caucasian that's dried up and done committ suicide here is the fuckin gun do you even know what pussy is you get off at the sight of your own giz ^this shit was all filler. qualitly or quantity my friend. what about Mallory? she never fucking liked you it was a grade 7 relation in grade 11, who knew? every fuckin person who saw ya "together" went to a dance and she acted like you didn't get her, she wanted something better ^eh...this hard he potential to be killer. you couldve won this battle right here...but you were way to inconsistant and didnt come close to pulling it off. you kissed her once! wow you pounced on that pussy! all the people readin this prose, see another relationship exposed ya ain't the mack daddy at all, just another bitch with dick so small always hangin with amie at the mall, she got no tits at all look you got something in common! ^what....the...fuck? less curves than a quarter mile track, got the squirrel sized sack it's the perfect couple, ugly and stupidity it was just something made to be Just give it up Bryan, you obviously got an interest in dyin you keep runnin ur cannon about Em "If we had a text...I could beat em" blah blah blah blahoobersit your so fucking full of shit your place is this board, no farther, no more, your goin nowhere ^again potential but you made it wack. Lightning obviously couldve killed it here but his verse was to be honest....wack. your bars were all over the place and 1/4 of the time you didnt even rhyme. Sureals verse wasnt that good either but he took this with his 2 good punces... foreal Dezyir broke it down well......nice battle....wasnt feelin whites verse that much... |
it doesnt let me poll da battle............................................ .................................................. .........................................
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This Kid Thinks He Can Take Me On With His Bold And Quotations..
Like Retards Doing Calculus, At Birth Musta Been Complications.. Ive Gone Six Lines With Sick Rhymes Like Xzibit Doing Spit Shines.. Like Blown Up Amputees, Its About Hip Mines, So Just Quit Try'n.. ^^^^^ took it for sureal..... |
THIS WAS OK BATTLE
SUREAL HAD WAY BETTER PUNCHES SUREAL ISNT AS GOOD AS I THOUGHT he would be but he roasted whitelightning here The first 2 lines out of sureals shit was plain wack VOTE SUREAL |
sureal easily took this hands down...i read the first bar of white
lightnings and didn't even continue for lack of rhyme as wack bar structure.......blah blah blah....vote sureal |
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