Somethings to get off my chest
 

Im So Frustrated I Hate This Belated Life…I Can’t Find It’s Meaning
Sick And Tired Of The Feelin Bein Treated Like sh%t ,Stuck Wearin This Damn Beenie
My Head Is On Fire…Im Also Sick An Tired Of People Talkin So Demeaning
Tired So Im Screamin…Yelling For Help, But Hell…Well. Nobody Can Hear Me
Clearly My Mental Face Is Similar To That Of Apollo 13 In Space…I Got Screws Loose
I'm Crazy But Got No Proof,Lost In The Race If You Hate Me Then f*ck You
This Is It Theres Nothing To Lose…Im Stuck In A Noose, Im Fuking Choking
Its Gone To Far To Be Joking,And My Rage Has Gone Past The Stage Of Provoking
All These Familly Issues Got Me To The Point Where Im Smoking In Misuse
But If You Diss Me,I Diss You,Thats One Thing In What I Wont Lose
My Problems Start Revolvin, Got Me Thinkin It May Take A Relvolver To Solve’Em
I Grab The Bullets Grab My Duals And Load Em,But All I Ever Do Is Hold Em
The Anger And Rage Trapped Inside Tha Cage Of This Page Tears Me Apart
I'm Not To Blame For Going Insane Its The Haters And Gurls Who Have Ripped Out My Heart
Pacin Back And Forth, My Mind Races Back And Forth As My Mouth Attacks A Fourth
Tought To Relate The Poor And Envy Them Who Have More While My Mind Pounds Sore
You Don’t Think Im Sharp?…I’ll Prove You Wrong When I Attack Your Heart With Swords
Rip It Out Along With Your Jaw Unable To Re-Spawn,Leavin You More f*cked Than Whores
I Don’t Wanna Use Violence But I Got Nothing Better To Settle This Score
f*ck It,I'm Bored *Aims Revolvers* I Cant Go On In This World No More..........
*Drops the pen*

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nice drop yo
i felt this, nice vocab
nice flow
nice drop overall, it was a good read
this shit is a good way to get shit off
keep it up
peace

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It was from the heart. It was raw and honest. It had a nice flow to it. I can see that you have alot of passion and feel strongly about things. I liked it.

well i guess it musta been RIGHT off ya chest cuz this line

Im So Frustrated I Hate This Belated Life…I Can’t Find It’s Meaning

how the fuck do you hate a 'delayed' life...i dont know...maybe you can enlighten me...

but ya flow was not all that great..wordplay was 'funny'...(as in iffy) and you coulda came truly raw...if you were "connected wit self" thats what gives emcees their TRUE abilities...when you come so raw...it aint nothin but self...cuz you know of YOUR talents...and its seen....just words of elevation for you duke...

o but man..you never do this..you just look hella stupid for tryin to use big words...*ahem*.........again!


My Head Is On Fire…Im Also Sick An Tired Of People Talkin So Demeaning


there is no fuckin way that someone can talk so demeaning...it can be an act of "being" demeaning...but you cannot TALK demeaning!!...look it up man...and find out what and how it is REALLY used....believe knowledge is power...i talk to you like this so you wont make the same dumb ass mistake....cuz there are cats that will REALLY clown you if you think IM bad!


elevate son...


igido

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