Shadows Of Doubt-Flipnautix and Maven
 

Maven-FlipNautix

Insecurity in mindstate; Traumatic state of mind
that is, overwhelmed by time fate; it's all I can find
feelings pursue me, purging skin clean of innocence
mindset, cold sweat, I awake, no flame of confidence
extinguished by cold shadows; translucent darkness
reaching from distances unbound, abusive in farness
co-existing, demonic reminiscing, mind cannot endure
expand lethargy, fade breath, crash in infernal downpour
of tears onto my pillow, soaked the shadow's remains
memories of all the losses, disregarding simple gains
my mindstate begins to falter, falling victim to my greed
& nails sink deep into my clenched fist; inevitably bleed
acidic raindrops of red death, thus, my failure predicted
torn hair, butchered scalp; shadows of doubt depicted
I was destined to crumble, was capricious to self-repent
illuminating rays of hope non-exstent, tranquility absent
feebleness drawn into myself, oh so much to leak free
exaggerated fear of shadow's opinion, lack of narcissity
lucid silhouettes holding tight, into me breeds apathy
shreaking silent cries of the night; carnage of empathy
until the silence screams no more and morning restores
shadows of doubt flee the scene, left with warning of war

Peace

SICK.... mad vocab, wordplay was to say the least fucked... style of bar 4 bar is pretty hype too... not supposed 2 post 1 liners but I'll tell u in person... so peace

god damn.
what happened to this forum?
a piece is posted for 3 days, and the only reply I got was from blunt, who I linked to the piece over AIM.
fuck this stupid OM forum, you god damn sleepers.

edit: Lmao, what a waste of my 1000th post.

Sickness man , It has been a long time since u posted an open mic , Anyways this was madd Sick man , The Opening Lines caught my attention , Ur Vocab was onpoint , and ur wordplay was madd Nice , U kept ur level through out the whole piece , and u stayed on topic , I would really like too hear this in audio , It's truly Legends Material , Overall u get a 10/10

^thanks bash....but this was a collab, me and flipnautix went bar for bar lol

Oh sorry I didnt know that , U should have done sumthin for cats too know when u're da one spitting and when the other cat's the one spitting

flying high like hosehead

*slips on banana peel*