felt like spitting up for critique
 

yo yo uh
only one person i no that can come next to me/
and he fucked up now his mic got a vasectomy/
i spit this shit just to fuck with heads/
mess me and like BOB you be dead with "bugs in ya dreads"/(bob marley)
like NIRVANA youll be "unplugged in new york" with blood shed/
unload two but leave four of you dead/
you couldnt survive in this curent no way you would sink/
id snap 182 of your bones before you could BLINK/
finish you off you become a missing link/
shove you up your moms puss leaving you pretty in pink/

sorry yall its just like a 5 minute thing just had to do something iam out critique how eva you want to
:mad:

i am just a rookie need some critiquing please yall i want some help i am sick of getting my ass whooped shit it fucking blows so hit me with something