Feedback Elevatin
 

I'm Practicin Several things right now so holla at me if this is a good drop I need feed back on this.....

Textual siege Creature performing 'stunts' so I'm the main 'Feat'ure//
Spew a Gasoline furnace to ya gal and I Heat-er//
Retail and Impale emcees, So Its a lyrical Chop Shop//An Herbs Grim Reaper,So I'm A Dead Crop//
Spear your intelect with atomic waste,Imprinted on your cranium with verbal Paste//
My punchlines Following after you in haste,Catch you after a short chase//
Your ship in quick sink,patches in your a computer a quilt link//

I know its short but I'm just practicin feedback wanted

yeah i liked it, i know my word dont mean much to ya but u had good word usage and flow

Uppin I need Feed back