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My edition takes stamina like a camera positioned to take
Pictures of scriptures in great magnitude snapshot this hot rap and rate
Chance to be peeking so I’m speaking in advance seeking
To enhance my ammunition in this rap game by critiquing
Others. MC’S need school these are the rules go to class
Learn to flow fast and go pass simplicity and grow cash
Make few decisions about true religions don’t stay party
Kneel and pray to somebody you can flare stupid
In prayer to Cupid the god of love, hoping for a rod from above
Being thug is odd mixture a fixture you nod your head as a scrub
Deal in liquor and be quicker to feel drunk as the chump revealed
Inside me, put boots on as the strong pollutes the weak, they squealed

uppin

cough*wack*cough. almost got it but not quite. forgot to RYHME halfway through that huh?

you mad cuz i got skill and you dont

every concept has bin played, if ur gonna replay a concept, at least do it well. and ur TRYIN 222222222222 HARD to rap intellectual, and ur tryna fit all ya vocab into 1 peice. u have potential, and its obvious uv either heard/read a piece by sum1 who's got vocab, its not a thing u can pick up cus its not the word, but wot surronds the word, JUST SUM ADVICE

keep posting