KrImZeN KiLLa vs DaShowStoppa2
 

5 or 6 bars
u spit first
no c h dr votes

ill spit asap after u im out holla

o my bad didnt no u made it.......................ill spit now.............
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can you guys vote on my battle with rappad and i'll drop a vote on this battle............................................ ....

sry dawg, i went 2 sleep cuz i had football practice in da mornin, so ill spit now........................................
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"Show stoppin" should b ya career, not rappin, cuz when u get of da stage aint no one clappin just gaspin(need air cuz it sucked so bad) :: You lyk a played out bar, sumtin no ones graspin(getting), cuz u should know, biteing gets u no were except a banning and an ass kickin//

Dis battle aint even worth my time, shit....i could merk dis chump wit 2 "LETTERED" lines :: Rip out his brain and shove it in his mouth dat way he can speak his mind..//

On da bottom of ya sig u got a hit list lyk u own dis shit, lyk u could murda any chump wit one of ya hits.. :: News flash bitch, imma flip dis script, unload some chrom in ya lip, so dat way u could say u have platinum spits...//

Call me da grim reaper cuz I ultimitly decide ya fate, swing an axe at ya back, down ya brain, rendering u speechless and obtaining a splittin head ache :: Or u could say i waz da butcher, cuz wit quick knives and slick nines, i got ya life at stake//

I get-applause as metaphors rip ya skull and render your sprained-nose-fractured :: I commit 'straight-sin-I-penetrate-skin' until the blood-in-your 'veins-flows-backwards'//

aight check it

you battlin me is "gettin you no where" like "expectin a another street from a dead end"//
when my "gat address your brain in first person" youll need a "miracle" cus its leavin you "Holy, say a prayer, Amend"//

you could "stab a clock" and still "couldn’t kill time", your useless//
you could "bite off my rhymes and still couldnt win", then get "banned like Ruthless"// (no offence to him)

like a person "born blind and deaf you aint hearin me nor seein me"//
Im "rapin you maniacally" then cuttin your lower body in pieces, then ill "rip out your heart" then "fold it" so it "leaves creases", then wait till your "heart rate decreases"// (die)

your rhymes are like "soft Bats in baseball" I can tell you not a "hard hitter"//
you can "say" you "transmit signals" as I "hit you in the mouth wit a radio transmitter"//

this "bitch became a femcee" after his "ovaries went on strike and stopped sellin"//
Ill "rip out your voice box" then "hit record" and "shouted" then smacked you in the face and said "quit yellin"//

Ill lyrically "distort your immune system" like "HIV does to AIDS patients", then leave you "ill and sick"//
"Im yo pusha", think highly of these words trick, ill "place my gat to your ear and turn your mind right", and all you "hear is a hallow click"// (pullin the trigger)

uppin fo votes (1)

drop a link and well peep urs

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da showstoppa was rippin the punhces a good battle but i was felin dst vese more
vote ds
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72030

aight thanks fo votin ill hit da link up in a min

uppin fo mo votes (2)

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Breakdown of my vote....
vocab=DaShowStoppa2
flow=DaShowStoppa2
meta's=DaShowStoppa2 (feelin this one>>you could "stab a clock" and still "couldn’t kill time", your useless<<real nice)
multi's=DaShowStoppa2 (but it was relatively close)
punches/disses= both of u came out hard in this area but overall i would have to say DaShowStoppa2 cuz just like his line>>your rhymes are like "soft Bats in baseball" I can tell you not a "hard hitter"<<<<Krimzen u didnt come out as strong as him
variation in rhymes= DaShowStoppa2 (ur variety in rhymes kept me interested not once did i drift off...cuz each line i read made me want to keep going)
complexity=DaShowStoppa2 (feelin lines like this>>>>you can "say" you "transmit signals" as I "hit you in the mouth wit a radio transmitter"<<<this is wat catches peeps attention, unlike always talkin about guns)

My Vote=DaShowStoppa2

Propz ta ya both on a nice battle, Krimzen urs was tight and all but overall like i stated in my breakdown of this vote it was DaShowStoppa2 who came harder.....

peace...
keep it real...

uppin fo mo votes (3)

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yo hit this up both of you then ill vote here honestly.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71995

this was a really good battle, both came pretty hard. Ima have to go wit DaShow though cuz his punches and wordplay was off the hook. Krim u had good stuff, some was a little played some didnt really flow right, but it was a solid enough verse, just not good enough to beat DaShows.

vote=DaShowStoppa2

it wont let me edit to put this in my other post so here: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=72008


^^hit that up with an honest vote, thanks

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thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (4)

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