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Castle00 vs ~YOUNG P~
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No h8/DR/Crew votes I'll drop first No feeding No biting No Recycling no bitching POLL VOTE then drop your link, i dun want no DR shit happenin', if you say return favor or anything, you will be repported.... Good luck homie... Pce |
checkin in young boul.....
should be a good one...... spit when ya ready...... .................................................. ......................... |
Check it... 1,2...
Look.. I highlight this bitches "negatives", like retarded kids attemptin' maths problems// I'm a kick this kid off a cliff, while his spittin jus so people think his lyrics can off-end// This kat is fake, cause its obvious he mustn't be able to REAL-eyes// That i see right through you, like a lawyer when he constantly lies// Thought it was blood stains, but jus red mascara runnin' down his cheeks as he cries// Tyin' to defeat me son, is more "impossible" than playin hide 'n' seek with the lord// You can call me a carpneterthe way i permanently lay down cats when im board[/b](bored)// Gettin' Serious I slash cats like pussies getin shaven, punches leave this kat in fits, like he was on Xtacy while ravin'// I'll make your "emotions" cave-in, "Sorry Doc but looks like we aint "savin" this boi from the HERB removal operation// I know you wanna be hard, but face it your "not"cause your skills like someones dick with syphylis, their beggining to "rot"// Your front is starting to "frey"like skin when its "shot", cause you gettin found out worse than when you slipped your coin in your bruthas slot// ^ Not feelin' that lacked flow, not as good as usual :(..... Spit now dawg.... Pce |
Hurry up dawg, you checked in then went off-line, better not be pre-writtin' ya shit man...
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chill i aint pre-writing.... i went ta bed...i live in philly and it wuz like 4...... damn....aight should be spittin soon..............................
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i'll vote on this when it's done..
if yall wanna vote on ma verse wid audo it would b greatly appreciated... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
Yo....ready..... ayo, ayo
Thinkin ya "super", "man", ya betta "jet-son", you and ya crew tryna be "heroes"// Like a "reckin-ball" i'll kill ya "castle" and leave ya wit "zeros"// 00 My punches "scarrin" you, and i know dis battle will "leave-a-mark"// You could high-"light" ya whole verse but i'd leave ya in da "dark"// Da flow is "explosive", "repulsive" cuz i'll beat u till ur domes corroded// Check da notion, ur words couldn't "kill" me even if it was "murder" who wrote it// If ya eva had "beef" wit me dis verse should "seal-da-meat"// Cuz ya "flow" and "punches" are "dis-crete"// Sound like a "retarted-paraplegic" tryna to da da "grindin’-beat"// Like "watered-down-margarita" ya verse is "weak", "punches" leaving no "im-pact"// Afta dis "ballistic-beating" dont cry ta ya mom, check if ya "limbs" are still “in-tact”// "In-fact", my "fiction" is "twisted-and-cracked", derre’s no "lettin-up"// SMACK!, Quickly "de-feet" you so ya "cant-stand" "gettin-up"// "Think-of-dat"... no more time wasted on dis "elementary" kid talkin "A-fo-apple" rap// My "thinking-process" is "sureal" and "ineffable", somethin u wont find on a "snapple-cap"// |
sorry i took a lil longa den expected wit da verse but i wuz gettin ready fo an oldhead party..... lol..... nice drop castle.... letz get sum votes..........
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damn castle.i was expectin u to come way harder than that..were u havin an off nite? and wrote that...its all good tho.....u came iight but jus not good enough..for u this was my favorite part
This kat is fake, cause its obvious he mustn't be able to REAL-eyes// That i see right through you, like a lawyer when he constantly lies// Thought it was blood stains, but jus red mascara runnin' down his cheeks as he cries// Tyin' to defeat me son, is more "impossible" than playin hide 'n' seek with the lord// You can call me a carpneterthe way i permanently lay down cats when im board[/b](bored)// dope ^^ but my vote goes to young p..he stayed consistent wit his punches..wordplay was on point..but only thing wrong is that ur structure is like a newbie...castle had the better structure..cats see it and expect his drop to be hot cuz of how its set up jus work on that vote - young p |
Aight yo Hottie.... i'll werk on dat.... thanx fo da vote.....but wheres all da otha votes..... cum on ya'll ...... where ya at???
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Yea thnx hottie, yea i dunno, i've just been really busy lately, plus couple of fmaily issues, but my verse was alot weaker than usual i felt...
Fuck It lets get some more votes in... Pce |
dam cant vote on this me and young n the same crew
tight battle overall but cant vote this one sorry guys yo castle00 can u hit this up for me though thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71659 |
Uppin'^^^^^^^
^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^ Honest votes guyz n we'll chekc them linkz out Pce |
uppin.....
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