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{UneeK} 08-09-03 02:41 PM

keystyle
 
enter my world of visions, mystics risen//
blisters kissing the tissue of ya mind prisms//
my system, is equal to non//
speak all ya want, i twist you cotton buds//
and kill you for fun//
fire bursting past my gliding carriage//
break the silence barrage, decibels beyond aerodynamics//
throwing melting plastic, in storm, blizzard hails of apocalypse//
a rock of spits crash landing in the arena of the aeshopgus//
and all those who opposed will snap like a wishbone//
a fish thrown, i flap sounds through differant time zones//
dragon finger tips, spawn a mass of burning fluid//
observe the way i ignite bright lights from its mucus//
like a god useless//
mc's create beefs with me that they cant finish//
from _freestyle_ to _pre-written_//
to the ^hare^ to the ^turtle^//
id rather walk with my shell, emerge with aurora to dispel//
flashbang tonsils, spit blind fury on the rap world i weild//

{UneeK} 08-09-03 04:25 PM

uppin this peice

Master Blaster 08-09-03 05:11 PM

Now It's My Turn

I Didn't Understand Where You Was Going With Your Verse

LoL Like Mine - Just A Bunch Of Words Thrown Together

But It Was Dope

I Love Your Word Choice - Had Me Scratchin My Head On A Few Of Them

Nice Sentence Structure - Not To Long - Not To Short

Good Read Overall - Keep Doing Your Thing

~1~


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