you was the icon R>I>P
 

what words can be said?
nothing brings back the dead!
shed- tears for the last year-hopefully they help you float away from here-
to a better place-
i never knew you excepet the music and the face-you were fresh to this rap mess but you repped us with grace-
the first latin rapper to go double plat- thats a fact- the one who put us back on the map-
biggie brought new york pac taught cali to a million-but you brought billions-
to the carribeans- the whole upper and lower antillians-
not just PR-par-but you was ill in brazil-ecuador felt your mataphors-
and on american soil you lived your words and we can still feel-your tormoil-
the latin BIGGIE-my inspiration murols all over the bronx dawg this still your city-
and it seams shitty how you fell too-but i see why god did it the world wasnt ready for you-

PU~ER~TO R~I~CO

said you aint going no where-
wonder if you realized we cared-pass your cd in stores i stop and i staIR-
and wonder if you were still here would your lines- and rhymes-
of gone world wide or would you be scrutinized-
would you be like jesus end up crucified-for being a thug showing your race love?probably still would of died-
so it is for icons- with mics on- you was a threat-
unified minds made us grab nines your influenced i'll never forget-
press rewind when i here PUNISH ME its punishen me-to see
such a soldier gone and past-and these ignorant ass-critics critique and shit -you lyrics you spirit but before they where on your dick-said life was CAPITOL PUNISHMENT man how could you predict-
now most catz is flowless-RAP FELL-BIGGIE IS GOD PAc'S JESUS THAT WOULD OF MADE YOU MOSES-WHILE EVERYONE IS CONDEMING HIP HOP TO HELL-these fucken traders- turn hate this- saying you aint one of the greatest-listening to ja rule these fools is tasteless-should turn racist-and hate these commercial fagest-with they videos ranking number one with BOB SAGET-

estas madicons no intienden que ti esiste-
el dia tu mueriste-se fui pero no te peldiste-

we still found you alive- in your music so it feels like you right there when i ride-drive-this is to make sue you survive-
call it your shrine-of all the heros out there your still mine-
y dios mio-how could we loose CHRISTOHPER RIO?
yo left us blind mijo.
but one day it will be my time flatline-and i will see you heaven to soak your mind.until then your legcy will be mine.

ill shit son, emotional, sentimental, a few parts didn't flow in my head, but it could just be me, but still, ill shit, keep droppin

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HOLLA TWIN THNX FOR THE FEED BACK

uppin

na, i wasn't feeling it, couldn't get around the lack of lyrical skill, lol
one bar was short then the next was real long, you were explianing your logic and it went way too long on some lines, the fucked the flow alot. rhymes were simple and predictable

content was aight, it was coo and emotional, but you didn't say much thing interesting, nothing that caught my attention and just stuff already said everywhere

before you write somethin, t hink about comin to the table with something new, and interesting....use more interesting vocab and even out the bar lengths........you do that, you'll be iLL