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~k-SkAnDaLuZ 08-09-03 07:17 PM

PURE ILLNESS!! K-Skandaluz - Hurry Up
 
Yo this track is PURE ILLNESS. Y'all will miss out if you don't peep this track. It's called "Hurry Up"

Lo-Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=500048&q=Lo

Hi-Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=500048&q=Hi


Feedback please! :cool:

Exodus001 08-09-03 08:49 PM

This shit is hot bro..nice flow..delivery..quality..etc.. all good peace

Orikle 08-10-03 04:49 AM

Your Flow Is Straight, Bit Choppy In Some Parts...Delivery Is Nice...Lyrics Are Ok...You Sound Canadian Uh...Are You?...Anyway Yeah This Was Pretty Nice...Stay Up...Pz...

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 08-10-03 11:49 PM

Thanx fam. Anymore feedback?

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 08-12-03 08:36 AM

Uppin for more feedback. BTW, no I ain't Canadian. LMAO

PostMan 08-12-03 01:51 PM

hrm sounds coo. pretty nice actually

things that may help:

1. Phrasing - This is a big problem i see on rb. You may have a dope line but try switching around the words to make it more hard hitting

2. Voice - Pretty good emotion but in the beginning and throughout some parts u stressed your voice. It makes u sound weak. The average person may not catch it.... i dont know but thats my opinion

~thier was some otha stuff but forget it this was pretty hot. keep it up.


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