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Fur-Rik \/ brainsurgeon ~> Da newbees battle!!
5 bar max (10 lines)
30 min limit after check-in no feedin no hate/crew votes ~> neither of us is in a crew so that shouldn't be a problem explained votes only! spiitin in 30~>this is my checkin! |
i wonna peep in on this afta.............................................. ..........................
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Now this shit sound ridiculous a new-b-itch battlin a lyricist//
you couldn't stick a hit to plastic if you threw punches wit a glue stick// but cha ya wanna rumble wit thunda that spit lightin for a livin// standin next to a medal rod hopin that I miss it but from a distance// I could spit this and end all ya hopes of clear vision// 10 rounds hit cha body but it took 10 lines to get rid of you// I pity you, simply because you a dick and suck to be you// If life was a ladder I definitely wouldn't fuck to be you// you should stand up when you talk cause aint nobody even reconigzin you// cause this hardcore and you a soft batch cookies who liked to be chew// I aint gotta bring my "A" game to this list of "U"s I give a fuck who they choose cause I snap necks back like fire from a hoo-doo// But who knew!!!! Fuck it....Uppin!!! |
Aiight it took me longer than 30....shit I am work, its a miracle it only took me 40.....busy as hell around here!!!
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you're simply retarded, but don't let that "count" ya votes illness? you could choke on anthrax, and not SUCCUMB MY QUOTES: <1> you could import compact discs and wouldn't "land hits" THIS IS RAP....TAKE YOUR POTTY HOME....GO PRACTICE!!!! <2> for you...aint taking my gloves off..cuz your lyrics are ugly like spawn without a mask on!!! don't grab a dic----tionary....cuz you're "a putrid, pallid, insipid, reclusive, obtusive, daft punk"!!! <3> (diagnosis) lyricism's "dark"* enough for this "diffuse"** fool not "phase me"***!!!! argue with teh doctor? NIGGA YOU CRAZY!!!! The style is PHAT...meaning can't "comp-eat against me"!!!! <4> fuck with real deals...but you know the rules..."you run" or "get blasted"!!!!! now you walked into the wrong bar....GOT YOUR "ASS-KICKED"!!!!!!!<5> (Get it - shot in the ass, even if he ran - "wrong bar") explanations of double meaning voters need help with: dark - meaning "sadistic" and "colour of light" diffuse - meaning "less intense" (colour of light), "weak" (as in stupid", and "lacking conciseness(: lacking organization and conciseness, especially in writing or speech)" 20 mins |
phase meaning "affect the stage of development", or "affect state of existence" blah blah..you should get it...NOW NO FREEPOSTS! expect UPPIN--- IF YOU DO SO SIMPLY UPPIN AND STATE THE SCORE!!!! good luck
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uppin............................................. ....................come on and vote guys and be truthful
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i think itz obvious, da surgeon dominated dis in every aspect, punchz, flow, vocab etc.
propz to both |
i think itz obvious, da surgeon dominated dis in every aspect, punchz, flow, vocab etc.
propz to both weak battle need to elevate but props to both holla front 1 |
i think itz obvious, da surgeon dominated dis in every aspect, punchz, flow, vocab etc.
propz to both weak battle need to elevate but props to both |
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