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Ill-Mental vs Justin~Vincible
6 - 16 lines..... get creative
you spit first since you want to no crew / hate / dick ryder votes...... spit dawg........... im gettin tired |
Checks in am i allowed i aint got 4 wins?............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
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yeah......... i got enough wins for both us.......... and i wont battle in front lines..... all fuckin newb votes
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true but it takes longer to get votes rom otha people cuz not much are in here
and are registerd to vote. |
Opener
this Kid BLows...and Ill Knows he Couldn’t Sub For me with Quiznos//1 ”Pissed Off'cause I slashed ya Bladder Then Shattered Your Face Like a Window//2 Leave ya girl a Widow...Droppin' Bomb-That have Beter Connections then Mobstas//3 When Asked Just Tell-The-Docta ‘I Hella-Choppa-Ya like a Hellicopta//4 Made sure you won't Sleep-For-Days, when Ya Stink-Of-Plagues, Knee Deep-In-Aids//5 Cleaved-And-Slayed,Put Each Piece-In-Trays, So The Cancer “Ear Away”//6 it's Apparant-That you're Arro-Grant stick ya face between- Ya-Legs and Probe Ya-Shit-Stinks//7 Cause illz only thing’s Your Skills Convinced-Me is Your Going down Quicker Then Lewinski//8 Fuck finish This Shit Hard I got a PASSION-FOR-ACTION with MACS-AND-AXES and MATHEMATICS that'll HACK-IN-FRACTIONS//9 and when I SQUIRT-your-HEAD I'll leave your SHIRT-as-RED as JACKSON-JACKETS//10 you can't LIGHT-MICS, you just TYPE LIGHT-WRITE, so how's this BITCH Makin' FUN-OF-ME??//11 I'm RAMBUNCTIOUS, eat PUNK-KIDS Like LUNCHES and 'SLAM-DUNK'-THIS "Like Mike" wannabe//12 I'm SMOKING-GUYS...Holding HOSTS-OF-NINES...Illz knows my HOLSTERS-NICE/13 so just LEAVE-RAP or I'll de-'CAP' this MAN like GLOBAL WARNING and POLAR-ICE/14 smash with BOULDERS 'till ya SKULL-LEAKS...your SHOULDERS ARE FOLD-ING/15 |
Last Line suppose 2 be cos it dint rhyme here the expo
smash with BOULDERS 'till ya SKULL-LEAKS ROLL-ING...and till your SHOULDERS ARE FOLD-ING/15 |
ok im about to key my shit up right now
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YO, Justin thought he was gonna beat me, he's a real wishful thinker-
i set out my "bait", he took it "hook line and sinker"\ Im about to blow his lines into smaller verses than they are- he so fag he opened a gay restaurant, and called it the "salad bar"\ This is the year that them bitch-ass HERBS gonna get theirs- you swingin from my balls, while you down there smell my dick hairs\ Im tired of herbs comin to RB sayin that the vets shouldnt be respected- cause you rhyme with your mouth open, while i spit with my dick erected\ You "eatin" up my "spits", cause you would hate for them to go to waste- you have a dirty mouth, you dont brush your teeth cause you like the after taste\ This kids a fuckin tree hugger, all worried about savin the planet- so he recycles all his lines.... then he says he didnt "plan-it"\ He also idolized n'sync... he loves blonde haired little boys- this is why he cant do audio.... too much "backround noise"\ This guy's really gay, he got beat by a F.A.G. and he wants more- must be a heretitarial thing... passed down by his mom the whore\ |
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^^LMMFAO^^ HAHAHAHYHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHHA^ dat shit had me on my knees cryin form laffin so hard..... any wayz........... da break down..................... justin this Kid BLows...and Ill Knows he Couldn’t Sub For me with Quiznos//1 ”Pissed Off'cause I slashed ya Bladder Then Shattered Your Face Like a Window//2 ^^ no bad for an open, props^^ Leave ya girl a Widow...Droppin' Bomb-That have Beter Connections then Mobstas//3 When Asked Just Tell-The-Docta ‘I Hella-Choppa-Ya like a Hellicopta//4 ^^sick flow^^ Made sure you won't Sleep-For-Days, when Ya Stink-Of-Plagues, Knee Deep-In-Aids//5 Cleaved-And-Slayed,Put Each Piece-In-Trays, So The Cancer “Ear Away”//6 ^^..............^^ it's Apparant-That you're Arro-Grant stick ya face between- Ya-Legs and Probe Ya-Shit-Stinks//7 Cause illz only thing’s Your Skills Convinced-Me is Your Going down Quicker Then Lewinski//8 ^^hahaha^^ I got a PASSION-FOR-ACTION with MACS-AND-AXES and MATHEMATICS that'll HACK-IN-FRACTIONS//9 and when I SQUIRT-your-HEAD I'll leave your SHIRT-as-RED as JACKSON-JACKETS//10 ^^*crickets cherp*^^ you can't LIGHT-MICS, you just TYPE LIGHT-WRITE, so how's this BITCH Makin' FUN-OF-ME??//11 I'm RAMBUNCTIOUS, eat PUNK-KIDS Like LUNCHES and 'SLAM-DUNK'-THIS "Like Mike" wannabe//12 ^^*falls asleep*^^ I'm SMOKING-GUYS...Holding HOSTS-OF-NINES...Illz knows my HOLSTERS-NICE/13 so just LEAVE-RAP or I'll de-'CAP' this MAN like GLOBAL WARNING and POLAR-ICE/14 ^^Not bad^^ smash with BOULDERS 'till ya SKULL-LEAKS...your SHOULDERS ARE FOLD-ING/15 Horrible finisher ill-mentals YO, Justin thought he was gonna beat me, he's a real wishful thinker- i set out my "bait", he took it "hook line and sinker"\ ^^I hear fricken old people say dat shit.......^^ Im about to blow his lines into smaller verses than they are- he so fag he opened a gay restaurant, and called it the "salad bar"\ ^^LMMFAO HAHAHHAHHAHAH, best line in whole battle^^ This is the year that them bitch-ass HERBS gonna get theirs- you swingin from my balls, while you down there smell my dick hairs\ ^^U betta den dat ill.......^^ Im tired of herbs comin to RB sayin that the vets shouldnt be respected- cause you rhyme with your mouth open, while i spit with my dick erected\ ^^Sick but efectfull^^ You "eatin" up my "spits", cause you would hate for them to go to waste- you have a dirty mouth, you dont brush your teeth cause you like the after taste\ ^^EEEWWWWW SHIT!!!, dat waz low, vry low, but....damn, dat waz good punchline^^ This kids a fuckin tree hugger, all worried about savin the planet- so he recycles all his lines.... then he says he didnt "plan-it"\ ^^zzzzzzZZZzzz........^^ He also idolized n'sync... he loves blonde haired little boys- this is why he cant do audio.... too much "backround noise"\ ^^not bad^^ This guy's really gay, he got beat by a F.A.G. and he wants more- must be a heretitarial thing... passed down by his mom the whore\ ^^not dat strong of a finisher, but it waz hurtfull^^ hmm.......all justin had waz sick ass flow, but the punches....werent connectin.........Ill on da otha hand,....his punches came a lot harder A LOT harder, and wasnt wack... tite battle tho, props and respect to both of ya........ vote-Ill-Mental |
a-yo, what da hell, it wont let me vote.............................
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^^^thx dawg...... you gotta contact end and tell him you want elite voting privelages................. uppin for some more votes tho
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justin
this Kid BLows...and Ill Knows he Couldn’t Sub For me with Quiznos//1 ”Pissed Off'cause I slashed ya Bladder Then Shattered Your Face Like a Window//2 ^^ half decent, good creativity^^ Leave ya girl a Widow...Droppin' Bomb-That have Beter Connections then Mobstas//3 When Asked Just Tell-The-Docta ‘I Hella-Choppa-Ya like a Hellicopta//4 ^^good flow but didnt feel the punch^^ Made sure you won't Sleep-For-Days, when Ya Stink-Of-Plagues, Knee Deep-In-Aids//5 Cleaved-And-Slayed,Put Each Piece-In-Trays, So The Cancer “Ear Away”//6 ^^WTF was that all about^^ it's Apparant-That you're Arro-Grant stick ya face between- Ya-Legs and Probe Ya-Shit-Stinks//7 Cause illz only thing’s Your Skills Convinced-Me is Your Going down Quicker Then Lewinski//8 ^^pretty funny. i give 2 chuckles for effort^^ I got a PASSION-FOR-ACTION with MACS-AND-AXES and MATHEMATICS that'll HACK-IN-FRACTIONS//9 and when I SQUIRT-your-HEAD I'll leave your SHIRT-as-RED as JACKSON-JACKETS//10 ^^*crickets cherp*^^ << lol and add a *yawn* you can't LIGHT-MICS, you just TYPE LIGHT-WRITE, so how's this BITCH Makin' FUN-OF-ME??//11 I'm RAMBUNCTIOUS, eat PUNK-KIDS Like LUNCHES and 'SLAM-DUNK'-THIS "Like Mike" wannabe//12 ^^*falls asleep*^^ << wakes him up to read the rest while I sleep I'm SMOKING-GUYS...Holding HOSTS-OF-NINES...Illz knows my HOLSTERS-NICE/13 so just LEAVE-RAP or I'll de-'CAP' this MAN like GLOBAL WARNING and POLAR-ICE/14 ^^ehh^^ smash with BOULDERS 'till ya SKULL-LEAKS...your SHOULDERS ARE FOLD-ING/15 ^^that was pathetic dawg^^ ill-mental YO, Justin thought he was gonna beat me, he's a real wishful thinker- i set out my "bait", he took it "hook line and sinker"\ ^^hahahahaha^^ Im about to blow his lines into smaller verses than they are- he so fag he opened a gay restaurant, and called it the "salad bar"\ ^^played as shit^^ This is the year that them bitch-ass HERBS gonna get theirs- you swingin from my balls, while you down there smell my dick hairs\ ^^that was mad weak^^ Im tired of herbs comin to RB sayin that the vets shouldnt be respected- cause you rhyme with your mouth open, while i spit with my dick erected\ ^^*chuckle*^^ You "eatin" up my "spits", cause you would hate for them to go to waste- you have a dirty mouth, you dont brush your teeth cause you like the after taste\ ^^*throws up then laughs*^^ This kids a fuckin tree hugger, all worried about savin the planet- so he recycles all his lines.... then he says he didnt "plan-it"\ ^^weak shit^^ He also idolized n'sync... he loves blonde haired little boys- this is why he cant do audio.... too much "backround noise"\ ^^thats pretty funny^^ This guy's really gay, he got beat by a F.A.G. and he wants more- must be a heretitarial thing... passed down by his mom the whore\ ^^hehehe F.A.G.s are awsome^^ justin had some decent flow with no really good punches. Cody had decent flow, decent punches but had some played stuff too. But the F.A.G. reference balanced that out. Vote= Ill-Mental |
i think ill mental took it wit punches flow multies and a lil metas but justin dont seem like ya average newbie tho it seems like hes been here a while well anyway props 2 both tho im out holla
ay can yall atleast peep my battle and tell me wha u think cus its gettin madd slept on thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5666#post695666 |
Thanks for explaining apart from this fag^........upin.................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........
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I really don't feel like breakin this battle down... but I'll do it lazily...
Justin... Wow... you need to get maaaaaaaaaaaaaaad help... that verse was pretty mediocre for a horrible emcee... seeing as it's the first verse I've seen from you... that was terrible... Every line... played... Every punch said in 99... wordplay was so minimal that kids would run inside on summer days to stay away from it... all in all... 8 thumbs down... that's equivalent to 1.5 outta 10 stars... sorry... Ill... I'm fuckin disappointed... that was the worst verse from you I have ever seen... the only semi quotable line from the entire verse was the salad shit... and that was ok... *shakes head* 4 outta 10 stars... Vote: Ill Av... |
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